Poem -

Pit of Falling

Life

author
Azogla West
Pit of Falling

The walls
has many ledges
Always dry
A ladder touching the air
Yet 
Every time you get up
You fall
Falling
Every time
Till you get up no more

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Awakening Beware Broken
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Simon Bromley

Such a small and yet powerful verse.  Well done

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