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plume

It fell from the sky and decended to earth,

An uncomfortable pin feather of a passing pigeon , An unexpected beauty that can only be felt by its captive audience, Feelings of delight and poetry fluttering around a labyrinth of uncertainty. It floated weightlessly without haist and landed hopeless on a sandy weed stricken ground, waiting motionless for a passing breeze to move it a couple of feet to a nearby footpath where its delicate angel white fluttering fluff Would be crushed and ground into the filth of the passing imortals. Condemned to mortality its remains would stay and be buried along side the accumulated waste that keeps generating on a putridly furtive suburban street. 

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Tony Taylor

Hey ASHLEY!!.... this is a damn fine 'analysis' ~ as you referred to it!!...... the flow of the phrasing is VERY well crafted as the reader follows its path from its initial fall to the finality of its burial!! ~

          ~ " buried alongside the accumulated waste
               That keeps generating on a putridly furtive
               Suburban street "

A fine début piece dear poet brother!!.......ALL STARS!!.... well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!.........WELCOME to COSMO!!.......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo

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Nefertiti

nice write ashley welcome to cosmo!

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