Poem -
Poetic Dissolve
In winter's timing and summer's meter
There waits but only one season
The procession of lives passing
The fall after fall
And the springboard past passing
The line of design
With questions worth asking
And the proof
That it was all worth chancing
The decoupage of dancing through
The diurnal and into the dark practice
Of the metaphysical romancing
Where the hidden potential
In all of humanity's
Evolving
Is dissolving
Into
Technology's,
Inhuman,
Hands....
Tony Taylor
* a work in progress
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Comments
Hi Tony, a very clear write about life, death and faith.
I took from the following lines humanities decreasing belief in God through science/ technologyÂ
- Syd xoÂ
Thank you SYD!!.......love those lines you pointed to in your first quote...... they came to me separately and I used them to build this write!!...... as always......a pleasure to hear from you dear brother poet!!...... stay groovy!!.......T xo ??âââ„
Hi Tony, great piece here, questioning our future, sure what else is there to do, inspiration hits us hard when we actually look, I believe for most humans, life is easier to accept behind a computer screen, we can become who we wish to be and as we go further into the matrix life and death will simply be, just RIP upon the computer screen, virtual mourning.
Hey GERARD!!.... this is such an awesome comment my friend......a truly observant and creatively profound possibility!!...... you've obviously thought about this before..... and I am grateful to you for sharing it my friend!!....... Kings to you!!.......T xo ??
Hi Tony,
I had to read this three times before I started to understand and although I hadn't looked at the picture, I thought of Avatar. Then I looked at the pic lol. Loved it.xo
Yay!! LOL!!.... that's so cool DONNA!!......I guess if that's what was in your mind and THEN you saw the picture....... it would be an almost joyous reveal!!...... so happy to see you on my page girlfriend!!...... going to yours now to see what you've been up to!!...... much Love to you and yours!!....... smiles.......T xo ??âłâłâ„â„ ? ?
:) This work is coming along nicely !
All the best to you.
Thanx SIR WATERS!!......I believe it will be something special in the edit/rewrite.......I normally wait three months or so to come back to it!!....thanx again brother!!........ later.......T xo â„