" POISON "

Piusha,

The theme of your verse seems to be good, though it is not a novel or new one. However, the depiction of the concept is enjoyable, still this can be further improvised at a later stage. This is only a suggestion from the eye of a reviewer. Do not get depressed. 

I love the below lines, which moves the readers towards an upper level of  spirituality. My vote and my nomination

• Longing to get the kiss of 
• death.No escape from this 
• gulf of toxins anymore...
• Don't want anyone to enter
• the cave deep within me,
• where treasures of depressions 
• growing eternally.....

Love, Hugs

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Piusha,

Like a Goldsmith makes ornaments in FIRE, keep your words, phrases, sentences, burning in the flames, dilute it and bring the output alluring more and more. This exercise, if you try for all your poems, I am sure, you will be able to post poems instantly.

Love,

WILLIAMSJI

Piusha, this is a great poem. Every sentence is fluid with description. I especially liked the following:

"Love showered in abundance,

but got addicted to a poison,

an emotional poison around.

Spreading slowly in thoughts

day and night,breaking my 

circadian rhythm .

Making his place selfishly,

engraving me in addictive 

tranquility."

Such depth and honesty. Great write!