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"Ponder"

the picturesque sequence of autumnal splendour, sequences of seasons with closed eyes. Yet the stature of imagination conjures thoughts darkened. Lightness of wonderment  still procures an indictment of what could yet be, with a thoughtless process of man's discretion. Yes the sin pertains to a blameless society but the guilt is plain for all to see. We have perplexed and interfered with nature's intent of naturalism like the proverbial "spanner in the works" Who are we to ascertain our right for conjecture, who are we to demand the planned path that leads to perfection. We had our chance to fulfill the jigsaw yet we deemed it necessary to remove the last piece. The picture will never be complete with the imperfections of mankind, rewind isn't an option anymore...

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Being Me

We had our chance to fulfill the jigsaw yet we deemed it necessary to remove the last piece.

This line jumped right out at me! It's just soo true, isn't it!

The natural world is beautiful and the whole of it revolves around and around on a perpetual cycle.... It is what it is, and it is what it is meant to be. And Man is the spanner in the works. Our actions do so much damage to this world. We have to meddle with everything x

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Keith Stubbs

Thank you, it's exactly the way I see it. No matter what we do mankind will never be able stand back and say "that's it, we've achieved what we wanted to" Like you say to much irreversible damage done x

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Tony Taylor

A truly powerful observation dear poet brother......men will be men.....the desire for power and prestige pales in comparison (for modern men) to the early men of this ever-evolving world......when men worshiped mother nature and truly appreciated what was being offered by mother nature herself!!......ALL STARS!!.....well done!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo  : )

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Keith Stubbs

Hi Tony 
Hope you are well, thanks for your comment. It's sad but true with what we see today keep safe my friend keep safe ??

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