~ Pondering The Particulars Of Friendship ~

How often have I found no loyalty
Where I expected to find it
How often have I found it
Where I least expected
It seems such a blessed thing
When at first we find a friend
And it feels so devastating
When we find our heart rejected
By the very one,
We called a friend...
Rare is the friend who faithfully
Stands by a friend through all their trials,
When we find this pearl within another
All effort becomes worthwhile,
When we look deeply into each other
And find a different color or opinion
It's as though a mirror is showing us
Something special to believe in,
Often it's a reflection of ourselves
That first frightens us,
And it's only a friend that can
Turn our heads to enlighten us,
How wonderful and peaceful a feeling
When we begin to trust,
Morphing selfishness in to thingsΒ
We rush to our friend to discuss,
And oh the conversations
That come so trippingly off the tongue,
That when a friend is there to challenge you
And bargaining has begun,
The magic of ideas and plans being made
For things yet to come,
Stirs the powers of the soul
Changing ideas into passions,
A mind boggling whirl
Of inspirations and contemplations,
Exchanged between to living souls
In never ending negotiations,
A most happy fencing match
With two separate points of view,
Boiling down to simplicity,
And the kindly acceptance,
Of just,
Saying,
I Love You....
Tony Taylor
* Rewrite from 1999
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if you dont mind me saying so, I have just had a most enjoyable perusal sir .. and I thank you for acting as both the catalyst and facilitator .. hence my hitting the pin, 5 star and green heart shaped button .. N :)
You are too cool NEVILLE!!....thank you for all the many humorous comments and insightful reviews of my work!!.....I am most appreciative!!......smiles.....T xoΒ : )
You are most welcome Tony T & then some sir :)
didn't see the first one but the rewrite is awesome so the first one must have been great!..................................................Jim
Thank you JIM!!.....I do think this one is much better......I appreciate your recognizing that!!....smiles....T xoΒ : )
CauseΒ I where you are, and I wonder what you do, but let start by saying.
I love you.Β
Sent this song into my head.Β
Maybe you sang this recently.Β
It's fun reading your comments LILIANA!!....and how songs come to mind.....after all we are all lyrically inclined as poets!!....thanx for this my friend!!....smiles.....T xoΒ : )
This is pure simple and honest write. I really love the simplicity.Β
something different ....
xxo
Leah
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Thanx LEAH!!......simplicity works!!.....hope all is well with you and yours my friend!!.....smiles....T xoΒ : )
You really have expressed the joy of friendship Tony, it is said that we have very few true friends and I believe this. That spiritual connection to someone else is so precious. Great write x
Yep!!...you're right my friend.....those connections can create such magical things in this life......VERY much appreciate your words Marion!!.....rock on!!.....T xoΒ : )