Praying in The Avant Garde

When You are all in all
and make all things good,
The Kingdom is here
When everywhere I turn
there is the face of God,
Your Glory is seen
Polish the mirror of my heart
that Your Pleroma may shine,
unobscured by the fragmentation
of Yaldabaoth's permeation
Erase my ego
that these cracks may disappear
Heal these wounds
and restore Your dream
Bring under control the leaders of the nations
So we can enjoy the wine
of a fine fermentation
Send forth Your justice
Foster Your loving kindness
Help us to see light all around
subduing the darkness
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VERY original dear poet brother.... twice now (in a row).... you've sent my curiosity jumping for the Thesaurus/Dictionary....with ~Pleroma & Yaldabaoth.....I Love learning words bro..... so please "School me" my friend.... definitely curious AL!!..... Regardless, a fine poetic foray into the Avant Garde aspect of prayer's potential!!........a pleasure my friend......LOVE & ROCKETS!!........T xo. : )
Fantastic poem!
I'm learning a lot.
I added some notes below to help others who (may) be like me and need to look the words, before making a review. Thank you for sharing another amazing poem!
Favorite Part:
I have a limited back round in religious studies, so I'm writing the review with blurry lenses and an open mind that one day, I'll return to your work and be able to grasp the full meaning. The words you used and how you set up the poem worked well. Although, it does require some knowledge on the subject to review property. Hope my notes help other readers who may not know what the words mean.
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Academia, Yaldabaoth
https://www.academia.edu/10772395/The_Lion-Headed_Yaldabaoth
Accessed January 2, 2020
Yaldabaoth
Your Dictionary, yaldabaoth
https://www.yourdictionary.com/yaldabaoth
Accessed January 2, 2020
Wikipedia, Pleroma
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pleroma
Accessed January 2, 2020
Wikipedia, Permeation
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Permeation
Accessed January 2, 2020
Permeation: