Poem -
Pretend
Pretend it’s my time to fake
Let’s pseudo equate
Take somthing good
“Tell-’em it’s great”
Don’t lie..
Exaggerate
Bitter sweet taste
Create that
Stupid look on a face
Challenge knowledge
Until it’s up in flames
Add to that fire
Fuel for inspire
Couple feet higher
“Until it’s a blaze”
Community “code..”
Gossip in blossom...
Smooth ride on a dirt road
Cooking up lunch on a burnt out stove
Selling value in a high intrest loan
Tell you what to be
Go on about your hay day
Don’t think of me
Remember what I say
lost in a job
the boss is the cause
Of misery and pain
Started out as work
“now it’s all play”
Comments
awesome Eddy!
Thank you so much Lisa . I really took a lot of time rearranging the stanzas and changing words to get what I was aiming for .. I hope it inspired and made the heat race a little to create a ambiance
WAOW!
Like I seriously love the way you write it's always so unique :)
Awesome write because even if I didn't completely understand I got the rush of emotions from it!
Omg thank you so much and that is EXACTLY what I aim for ...the rush .. I’m not telling a story I’m helping the reader create there own story.
thanks so much for the support
you are a great writer too
and I really get your intentions and respect and enjoy your poetry as well