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Promises

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Angela Deschamps

You leave and I went on to see if I can be the same with someone who promises the same. But promises never stay,
sometimes even fade away.You were the promise that didn't stay.
You were the promise that couldn't even last a whole day.

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Syd

Nothing worse than empty promises Angela. 
Good poem. Welcome to Cosmofunnel

- Syd
 

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