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Proud Of My Poverty

Proud Of My Poverty

Sunblest Aldi bread 
Defrosted from the freezer 
An open sea coal fire
With a Northen Echo bleaser 

Through the tinfoil tops of milk
Spuggies pecked their feral beaks
The wild cold wind gnawed 
At our frozen beetroot cheeks

Wood chip then dado rails 
Adorned our thin walls 
Breathing second hand smoke 
Brought hardly any side effects at all

Sticky summers, hayfever 
Long grass and pollen 
Childhoods are long gone....
But never forgotten 

Subtle things have changed
Recession, strikes, austerity 
We can almost afford council houses
To fit around our TV's

Proud to have memories
Proud of our people's sovereignty 
Proud of our upbringing 
Proud of our poverty!

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Shaun Cronick

Syd, this just epically and most poetically sums up every poor kids growing up memories then it seems to later switch gears as the jackboot of Thatcherism  ominously emerges and impresses on the poor more hardships..
At least she couldn't tax and snatch away your memories.
Great poem and can relate dearly to.
Thanks Syd for writing how it was and still is for many and stay poetry frosty.
And you call them Spuggy's, here in Wales we call them Spadgy's.

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Syd

Hi Shaun,
She certainly didn't manage to snatch away my memories! ....What an awesome comment by the way!

I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and that you can relate.

I've been up since 4:00am and haven't written in a long time. My writing has been lubricated by Scrumpy Jack. I'm off to bed now but I'm definitely interested in checking out your page.

Thanks for the inspiration. Much appreciated - Syd 

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Shaun Cronick

Syd man, Glad she failed on your memory issue and I most certainly can relate to everything you have served up here!
Been out of the poetry loop on here for 8 months myself, just feeling my feet again.
And I love cider and I'd be hard pressed to think of better drink.
Sorry about that and good night Syd.

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Marion

Syd I love this truly....most of all I understand it. Best line for me ...
'We can almost afford council houses
To fit around our TVs'...never a truer word said... made me smile 😊
 

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Syd

Thank you so much Marion. Glad you enjoyed the poem.

- Syd 

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John Loopstra

Syd, well put in a nice rhythm, such a contrast from the contents and yes, it pays to remember where you come from (as artists my mum and stepfather were never rich. We regularly shared 3 porkchops with six people). The old farmhouse was to be demolished in favour of a thourough fare (which happily did not get realised). The rent was cheap but one winter morning I woke next to a frozen cup of tea, whuch I only drank half the night before🍵🤣. I am glad to be relatively well off nowadays (able to live the life we like to live (childless by choice due to the consequences of wring parents on both sides). Yes, I remember and appreciate the efforts of my mum to sort of raise us decent) hmm, I was into Punk rock 45 years ago 😂😭... Aye, I like this poem 

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Syd

Hi John, thank you so much for reading and commenting. It's nice when other writers can relate to a poem.

Take care  - Syd 

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