Racked

Where once this world was all I could ask for,
Now a dark choking side is difficult to ignore !
I viewed it as a wonder full of joy and delight,
But now it's hard to be involved try as I might !
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Once I saw everything as colourful and clear,
But now all I wish to visualise doesn't appear !
When you were taken from me life collapsed.
Time was blissful opportunity but it's elapsed !
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I don't want to be without your love anymore.
It's one tearful hell after another to deplore !
I've decided to leave and be beside you again.
I can no longer be racked by a wrenching pain.
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Hey SIR WATERS!!.....I love the way you conveyed the struggle....... bringing a climatic decision in its final stanza...... it was perfect in its poetic intensity .......well conceived & delivered!!.......ALL STARS!!....... great read!!.......T xo. ?☀✴
Grief comes to us all at some time in our lives that is so tough to deal with it becomes easy to fall apart. This write reflects on the wish to no longer have to deal with the overwhelming sense of loss. Souls going through torment need as much sympathy and care as possible.
Thanks for reading this and appreciating its aspirations to inform.
Take care my friend. :)