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Katina Woodruff...

I enjoyed reading this poem. 
There is a softness within the lines. 

The last line, 
"Neither wished or untrue." Gives the poem a mystic feel.
 
I think, if you added more to the poem, it would really open things up. I could have read an entire page, written in this format. Well done. 
 

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Lexi Page

Hi Katina

Thankyou very much for your kind response. I am glad you enjoyed reading this, I agree adding would of opened it up a bit more but I like to let the reader come up with their own conclusions to what I'm writing about.
Thankyou again for taking the time to read my poem :) 

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