Stars, dark and silent
Shine without lightÂ
Into the temple of Midnight
Worlds collide into one
Mass of the damnedÂ
Entwined with blood cries
Ravens swoop with pain
Into the midnight rain
Hi Laura Devine!!........Dark and compelling........reminds me a bit of Sylvia Plath..........fine sense of timing here too..........I like it............well done my friend.........and Welcome to COSMO!!...........smiles........TÂ xx
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Hi Laura Devine!!........Dark and compelling........reminds me a bit of Sylvia Plath..........fine sense of timing here too..........I like it............well done my friend.........and Welcome to COSMO!!...........smiles........TÂ xx
Hi Tony Taylor.. thank you for your read and feed back..
laura
Love this dark little write! 5*s!
Val ♥️
HEY LAURA PLEASE ADD MORE OF THESE KINDA WRITINGS ...I LIKE IT ROUGH ..MAYNE..
Welcome to COSMO family, good write, thanks for sharing, my applause, wish to translate your above short poem to my mother tongue, Malayam.
My vote 5 stars
Regards
Williamsji Maveli