Poem -
Raven Showed Me The Light
From my Raven Collection
My Raven's back
tonight he stayed
he stayed with me
through my dismay
I never knew my tears could fall
eyeballs swollen
dusk till dawn
I asked him why
why, do you stay?
softly gently
he, did say
you're weak and tired
you're lost in grief
I'll stay with you
this moment brief…
and he did.
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Comments
Hello Shirley...
I hope he leads you good...
Enjoy your time of comfort...
Beautiful write!
Beautiful pic!
Thank you for sharing...
sparrowsong
My Raven is my messanger he comes to me in my grief, he is my friend. Inspired by Edgar Allen Poe who's poem (The Raven) is one of my most inspired reads, thank you dearest sparrowsong 🌹
awsome poem!!!!!!
Dear Greg, I started writing about my Raven because I had profound grief, now he has become a part of my poetry collection, thank you so much for coming by with your kind words of encouragement 🌹
I think I have said before how much I love poetry that has recurring themes. Yours are your angel, your raven and your deer. For me it bathes your writing in a spirituality which I also love.
I really like the short lines here. They completely suit your poem. And I love the rhymes.
My favourite line(s) - I'll stay with you this moment brief. So touching and caring.
And whatever inspired you to add the last 3 words did a great job my dear friend. Perfection. 🌹
Dearest Bernie,
My raven my angel and yes how very kind you are to give such encouragement, the last lines dear Bernie, that's where the light is. I always like to positivetize my poems if you will excuse this new word I have just invented lol thank you dear Bernie. 🌹
You are very welcome dear Shirley. Positivetise is a great word. Lol. 🌹