Reacquaintence With My Dreams
Like 8 Pin it 1Last night I slept so peacefullyย
Last night I slept so sound
ยSinking through soft cotton sheets
My consciousness unwoundFree range sleep much neededย
Not manufactured by machines
ย
Having not dreamt for weeks
I loved the reacquaintence
Seeking sanctuary within my dreamsRelient on artificial unconsciousness
No water for seeds to sow
Dependant on artificial unconsciousnessย
Only artificial plants can growSoftly swimming through vivid slide showsย
No fear of sinking...ยI will not drown
Delicate shoots of springย
Rendered with dew
Emerge now
From the nourished fertile groundRefreshed with optimismย
Like springtime after winterDreams are abstract snapshots of my life
Through a rose tinted filterGlowing with positivityย
Now understanding what it means...Understanding the loving courtshipย
Between unconsciousness and dreams
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Comments
Outstanding poem, Syd.
Like an acid trip on paper--or a computer screen as the case were --only better, lol.
Wasn't it EA Poe who said;
Good stuff, Syd...
~โ ๏ธโฃ Deanโ โ ๏ธ~
Hi Dean, thank you so much for your kind comment and positive feedback. If it was Edgar Allen Poe who said that, then I must read his poetry. Sounds right up my street.
Take careย - Sydย
Fantastic write SYD!!.....the lilting sound the music of this write made in my head was absolutely perfect for a piece with this title...... the line ~
ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ~ "Seeking sanctuary within my dreams.."
~ stuck out for me!!..... it stirred in me that urge to go back to sleep when awaking from an intense dream....... the phrasing in this write is just STELLAR bro ~ "abstract snapshots of my life.." ......"artificial unconsciousness..."...... wow!!..... perhaps I am a bit bias because I have so much trouble sleeping and so many unbelievable dreams.... so much so that I begin therapy on September 7th, the day before my wedding ~ go figure!?......anyway, loved EVERYTHING about this piece my friend!!......PINNED!!......smokin' grooves SYD!!......smokin' grooves!!......T xo ?โด???โดโค
Hi Tony, thank you so much for your kind comment. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem so much that you pinned it. Your comment is awesome.ย
Last night was the first night I hadn't had a drink for weeks on end. The fresh vivid dreams I had inspired this write and hopefully to cut down on drinking much more.
Good luck with your therapy and all the best for your wedding.
Love and rockets - Syd xoย
Wow man!! Awesome! This is so good Syd! Hat's off Sir! Your vivid, imaginary talent wonderfully connected to a rare, or common feeling here, absolutely. โบ
Hi John, thank you so much for your kind comment. How are you doing? It's been a while since I've stopped by your page for a read. I hope you're keeping well.
- Sydย
Any time Syd! I'm good, cheers. I don't have as much time to myself since my 17yr old daughter moved in with me, which is brilliant! So, I visit here and write, less now. At the moment. But still a slave to inspiration, of a rhyming kind, now and then! Lol! Nice to hear from you โบ
My Dear Syd,
He rests so very peacefully
Artificial sleep inducers eschewed
The passions of his vibrant dreams
Now totally renewed
Love you Bro,
Larry xxx
Hi Larry, thank you.
Expert words as always.
Love you too mate - Syd xoย
Awesome write Syd it is such a pleasure to read yourย musings
Thank you so much Lisa. Likewise, it's always a pleasure to read your poems.
- Syd xoย