Poem -
Real Love
Goodbye
My love is real my love is trueÂ
Words I speak to make your heart smile
My love is faithful
My love you are my favourite tattooÂ
I’ll hold you close and be your protectorÂ
My love is tender
My love is yours my dear
I will never hurt you
My love you’ll always be
My love will never die
My love you’ll be my last
You lied and lied
Til the day I had courage to say goodbye!
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Comments
Love will always be tested Angela..
Trampled.. is another thing .
Very nice poem.
All the best.
Thank you ??
Good work poet!Â
What I would suggest for the format is: 1. Use a comma to separate longer phrases and lines. Or, to create shorter lines where a comma could be placed.Â
Original:Â
With change:Â
My love will never die.Â
My love you'll be my last.Â
You lied and lied til the day,Â
I had courage to say goodbye!Â
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Thank you so grateful for your guidanceÂ
I will take more care when writing again my next poemÂ
thank you Katina
Lovely to read x
Thank Pratibha