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.... red ....

We should sort your clothes I
suppose
Leave it you say....empty
wardrobes can be depressing
And...

What would you store
there?...just more clothes I
assume... to beat up the
shadows
To bully out the gloom? 

I sigh...pick up a hoodie...red...
from the bed
I might keep this, I say, maybe
wear it today
Keep it you say, it looks better on
you
Red can be warming
It'll stop the blue getting through

But it's yours I say, yours
This red's so so you
But I'm dead mam...I'm dead...so,
Please wear it, please do...
Wear the hoodie mam

M P 7/9/21
 

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Neville

Of course, not everyone will have been here before, but those that have, will no doubt relate, understand where ya coming from and fall in love with red themselves .. N x 

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Marion

Thankyou my friend x

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Tony Taylor

WOWWW!!...Amazingly visual!!!....the conversation so real......the poetry truly magical!!......PINNED for perfection!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo  : )

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Marion

Thankyou for a beautiful comment my friend x

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Being Me

Oh ... A friend of mine sorted her mothers things after more than a year of her passing. She didnt feel ready before. After sorting it today she realised she still hadn't been ready. There is never a good time for this sort of thing. As for the hoodie...wearing it may make you feel closer to him...you do what you FEEL is right. What you FEEL is right WILL be right. Another awesome poem x

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Marion

Thanks love...I do wear it...I bought it for him after all..  😊❤

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Being Me

Awwww.... good decision 😊❤ x

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