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redemption

So many people place the blame on god,
They've had a bad day,
Week,
A year,
They never question if it is them themselves who have made bad decisions,
God is not in charge of your life,
He is not accountable for your selfish actions,
If you really take a good look around,
So many miracles happen every day,
All across the world,
He is busy with important matters,
Healing hurts,
Rebuilding lives,
If you seek forgiveness,
Then ask him,
Don't blame him,
After all nobody is perfect,
So many people i know say,
I wonder how many china men i ran over this time,
Bringing bad luck,
It is your negative thoughts that bring it upon you,
So many say i must have broken 10 mirrors,
All this bad luck,
Seek forgiveness inside yourself,
Let go of your own mistakes,
Offer them to god,
In exchange of happiness,
He will answer your call,
But only if you truly believe,
And truly seek redemption.

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Tony Taylor

Hey Nardine, a few weeks ago I wrote on this subject, It's called Redeemed and voices the same concerns you convey so well here......my version is now a song and is at an agency right now in final stages of consideration for sale......it's one of the best poems I have ever written and it looks like it's going to make me some money too, all because I wrestled with these same issues and I think everyone does at some point in their lives..........another fantastic write my friend.......5*s.....you're such a good writer Nardine.......big smiles.....tony

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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Nardine,

Good spiritual and faithful instincts, My applause, My vote

In exchange of happiness,
He will answer your call,
But only if you truly believe,
And truly seek redemption.

Regards

WILLIAMSJI

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Nardine Sanderson

Thank you sir williamsji xx, much love and respect to you sir, nardine Sanderson xx

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Nardine Sanderson

Thankyou, Tony, wow sweetie that is fabulous news congratulations my love, well earned and deserving reward, much love nardine Sanderson xoxo

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Tony Taylor

Thanks so much, you know that you were the first person I talked to on this site, right?  I really appreciate all the advice you've given me.....look forward to many more comments from you my friend....thanx again Nardine........tony xx

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Nardine Sanderson

I appreciate our friendship, a treasure of heart, always here for you, just msg me anytime, in proud of your achievements Tony, hats off to you sweetheart, taking all compliments onboard, you are a great man, much love nardine xx

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