Poem -
Reflections Of Green
A green lake wept it secrets
In the summer still one day
It's melancholy ripple, gazing up
And far away
It tears traced the gorgeous
birds
As freedom held their wing
It mourned to hear their music
As air called them out to sing
It looked about its earthbound
soul
As just water
In a gaping hole
Yet all that mine eye there did
see
Was loveliness and great
beauty, yet
Green lake only wept and
wept
Reflections of its angst
Of dreams to be that
Something more, for
It yearned to be a cloud
And soar
Away...
M P 6/5/21
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Comments
wow, brilliant write! I've bee told I have a gift, but you have multiple gifts in the writing department!
That's a fab comment Jim ...not true ...but I'll take it anyway😄😆 thankyou kind man x
Soo stunningly beautiful my poetess of perfection 🌹💕🌹
Thankyou love...hugs 🤗🤗🤗
Beautiful poem , I loved the ending lines with the rhyming scheme:
“Reflections of its angst
Of dreams to be that
Something more, for
It yearned to be a cloud
And soar
Away...“
Aw thankyou Mr Shallow? ...appreciated my friend x
I’m to young to be called Mr. lol but yes male here :)
Well if you are over 16 you are a mister lol...unless you are master shallow?? God forbid 😬😃
Superb, simply superb.
It feels as if one is in a dreamscape after reading and light as feather.
Beautiful, beautiful writing Marion and you close on a yearning to be a cloud and soar away, which is breath taking to read and take poetry solace from.
A magnificent piece and thank you for making my night with your poetic touch of class and expressed beauty.
It's a good feeling to be poetically bowled over Marion and thank you for doing that my friend.❤️
Thankyou so much for a wonderful comment Shaun...appreciated my friend x