Remaining With Me
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Your moans linger constantly in lucid memories,
Taking me to a place where I melted at your pleas.
There reality gave way to a fantasy needed so much
Where every move was a response to heartfelt touch.
Grey normal dispersed, your presence taking me away,
To a moment neither of us could find anything to say.
We found what we craved through physical expression,
Being in unity as we embarked on our sacred mission.
The goal was to reach heights neither had experienced.
There I simply captured time to remain forever entranced,
As I remember vividly what was found in hot sultry nights,
You remain, tempting me with purely heavenly delights.
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Hey Richard...this is very romantic....enjoyed the read
lots of love...Rose
A different stance on expressing romantic feelings but nevertheless still a loving piece !
Memories are so important to so many.
Take care. Love and hugs ! :)
Hi Richard Beautiful piece, romantic memories
in a loving relationship you honor this lady with
your gorgeous words, as it should be
very much enjoyed
warmest wishes Debs
This is a poem as tribute to those who have suffered loss and only have memories of a relationship for comfort. These memories can cause pleasure or pain depending on their mood. Reflecting on good times that will never happen again can be powerful indeed.
Warmest wishes to you ! :)
Hey SIR WATERS!!......I love that you went to a different metering here...... the extended lines giving it a dreamier ambiance......a place you can float back too...... for comfort and sweet memories in retrospect.... again, I love the unusual tempo of this piece......ALL STARS...... well done brother poet!!.......LOVE and ROCKETS !!.....T xo. ?
So glad you appreciated the sentiment and structure of this piece.
Thank you for the support you always give.
Best wishes as always. Hug. :)