Poem -

Remember Me She Said

memories, who would have em eh'

Remember me
she said ..
Come sit awhile
and sip ..
Today has not
been bad
at all, and then
tomorrow
maybe will bring
a whole
new raft
of sweet market
possibilities ..
Oh’ yes indeed,
on rare occasions
such as these ..
They all did say
she seemed
more like some
kind of May queen
perhaps
than a single
solitary sunflower
basking in a
field of exquisite
tumbleweed ..

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Being Me

Love this!

she seemed
more like some
kind of May queen
perhaps
than a single
solitary sunflower
basking in a
field of exquisite
tumbleweed ..

brilliant! Xx

 

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Neville

My word, that was very bold of you Tina bless You my Friend xx

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Being Me

Great poems deserve great praise 😊 xx

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author
Neville

then I'm just gonna have to thank you all over 💖 again :) xx

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Tony Taylor

What a great example of......STELLAR, poetic prose!!......PINNED!!....love your stuff NEVILLE!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo  : )

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Neville

How extraordinarily kind .. Thank you Tony T ........... L & R's reciprocated sir ... N

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Dusk Arising

Some people are so exceptional that they do make the rest seem like that field of tumbleweed with their sunflower personality radiating joy. Lovely happy read Neville.

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Neville

Thank you DA .. yes indeed there have been a few of those exceptional individuals whom I believe have crossed my path over the years .. but they are still very rare indeed .............. and certainly, very, very special ....................... Neville 

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