" REMINEE " warrior of light.....

She found herself in the end of a tunnel, near her a pit of bubbling mud
Abruptly the pit began to seethe and spit forth grotesque figures of mud and blood
They faced her like clay statues formed by the unadept hands of a child
She could discern awkward limbs, vague, misshapen features but no eyes
Reminee unsheathed her sword and began to radiate her frustration
At these dull featured soldiers, giving off scanty illumination and weapons
That glowed red in their hands, a dozen concocted demons from hell
Suddenly, Reminee burst into white light, like a pulsating radiant energy
The creatures began encircling her glow as if to warn their enemy
But she smiled as she flashed into waves of magical radiation
Her sword held high as it shot forth piercing white hot waves of humiliation
Melting each creature to the ground, and she did it absolutely with no sound
Not a drop of mud or demonic blood even came close to her pristine white glow
Not a sound from the tunnel behind her, not a peep anywhere could be found
For her explosion had seared and turned everything into gold
The tunnel became a chamber of treasures, a gift for all to behold
Reminee could turn evil to good, and she made sure everyone understood
If you came into her Kingdom where she served the greater good
Her blade of right and her speed of light would be watching, protecting
Everyone existing inside her Kings realm of Golden Reflecting
The legends had all been proven true, the richest land made of gems
Was right here in this glen, where Reminee waited to defend
Proving that wealth could not conquer good, was the Mantra prescribed by the King
And the heavens had provided the King with perfect protection, in the form of REMINEE
She could not be killed, she could not be touched, she could not do anything wrong
She only knew right, she could fight through the night, she was perfection from GOD
And all the world new her name, until the next day when memory of her faded away
And she'd be forgotten until the next time the King called her name
And she came riding waves of radiant energy
And turning evil into warriors of light
Reminee, goddess of Right.....
Tony Taylor (Chicago)
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WOW!!! I could do with some of that umph! today!! Can you send her my way when she`s got a minute please! I really enjoyed reading this one T`. Well done honey for a great story and one my littlies will enjoy too! I love ya kidda!!! G xx
Georgie, all day today you have been my hero..........always going out of your way to do kind things.......I'm glad that you enjoyed this.......I know it's a little long ..........but if you think the "littlies" will enjoy..........then there's gotta be something good in there..........hugs-n-smiles............tony xx
Amazing write sweetheart, very powerful, picturesqueness so full of lovely strong colours and ideas, your so creative my friend, love these lines,
"For her explosion had seared and turned everything into gold
The tunnel became a chamber of treasures, a gift for all to behold
Reminee could turn evil to good, and she made sure everyone understood
If you came into her Kingdom where she served the greater good"
well done baby cakes xx love your sis nardine xoxo
Hi ya Nardine, I'm really happy you stuck through this piece........I know it's a long write,,,,,.......but your comment about "picturesqueness"..made me smile BIG........thanx for taking the time sweet soul (big sis).........hugs-n-smiles..............tony xx
There is no length of write from you sweetheart that could ever be to long to read right through, loved it xoxoxo ( bro) xx love to you tony nardine xx