remnant love.
I sit countless hours,
upon thy bedside,
Breaths thy no longer see,
Thy breathings
thy remnant shallow water,
pulse fading's day,
Thy bloods flower drained,
In hand upon thyself,
Doth hold ,
pouring heartedly ,
Thy eye's,
Thus cold,
Echoing silence,
Non,
Nor hearts beat sound,
Internal lightened cloud,
Upon thy lovers,
body shroud ,
I sat countless hours,
Thy lovers livings hour's,
Brings not breaths,
nor haste ,
Upon hours,
Nor wasting's showers ,
Within thy eyes,
Bore moments weary,
Thy lovers spirit rise,
Thy countless hours,
Aside,
Freightless fragile heart,
Thy bride,
Within reprieved wings ,
Escaped breaths darkened hours,
Thy lovers heart entirety ,
Until breaths breathed,
no more,
Thy eyes truest sight,
Upon thy love,
Until endings parterre ,
Thy body thy love,
Lay's sleeping evermore,
I sit countless hours,
Thy hand upon thy grave,
This love,
Thy memories staid ,
Nor upon drinking's drops,
Shall thus love,
Ever fade.
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Just and fair rational note,...feelings of trust..."Thy lovers spirit rise, Thy countless hours, Aside,.....Thy hand upon thy grave, this love, thy memories staid, Nor upon drinking's drops, Shall thus love, Ever fade.",...well done....leniency in words and action,....with love...xx Ravindra Kumar xx
Loves leniency ' you never know just how much you have to give, until you have minimal amount of time, much love sweetheart Nardine xoxo
Since childhood I have been an extra ordinary boy,....eagerly watching activities of everybody is a regular part of my exercise...moreover caring about result is not my motto...may be either affirmative or negative in tone, apart of it similar to poetess Leola trust on the God and supernatural powers mine never fails...with this great support I occasionally get repents,...thank you...xx Ravindra Kumar xx Â
Ravindra i have read your about me , upon entering Cosmo funnel, you indeed intrigue this mind of mine, as you comment upon my writes, i earn the values of your minds thoughts, if true full upon reply of course, to me you seem to hold back occasionally, in uncertainty, i do enjoy your opinions, much love nardine xoxo
Hey Nardine,
In this one, your character has wondered into a wonderfully written prelude, to a love, (never more) to be had, only mere memories, doeth resides, in the chambers of a heart, left broken and to be submerged forever within. Even in the depths of its last elixir droplets and beyond, even the test of time, shall this love forever belong. The residual remains, of a love meant for the stay, of a lifetime and beyond... Once the fabric, of what all wants and desires were made to be constructed of, now just, merely shredded thoughts, desires and images, of a love left only, to be reduced to just traces, residing and rendered, in very minoot pieces. A lost, left tragically felt and sadly held onto. Only in the silence and confines of a heart, forever to be broken and wants never to be had, nor physically held, ever more, shall this pain reside….A  heart, broken  beyond repair…Again you have out did yourself Nardine and very strong poem, of a love lost and only heart-ache to be thy gain…A life time of love to be gave by one and lost by another..Superb…
Sincerely,
Jim
Jimmy sweetheart, you have more than covered the whole hearted theme, I'm amazed with your attention to detail, yes this write is inspired by a deep loss of mine, all the hurt in truest detail, an irreplaceable loss of love, unto death, pieces of memories layout in this write, i love how expression comes so easily to your comments, thank you kindly, :), much love nardine xx
Nardine you are quite welcome and a very talented lady...I am deeply sorry for the once two hearts, depleted now to one but just as you stated, you do have wonderful memories, that remain and it surely was better to have had and lost rather than never to have had at all...Keep your head high dear lady and heart open, there exist a lot of reserved room in there for you, once again, to be secure and content, with the next chapter,( if not already),of your life to be shared with another. When those fuzzy little feelings are felt, when the right one steps into your life and suits all of your fancy....You owe this too yourself and if he has been introduced into your life already, that's wonderful...
Take Care Dear lady and friend,
Jimmy
Thank you jimmy for your kind and supportive wishes, the thoughts of new love keep my heart warm, much love to you dear friend, nardine xx
An emotionally touched, tailored verse of love, faith and loyalty, Reserved for my POET'S PEN - My applause, My vote
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you kindly sir williamsji , much love nardine Sanderson xoxo
I agree fully and truly on the positive comments rendered by my brother Sir Jim Arnold Sir about Nardine Sanderson's wonderful and amazing verses posted since the last two months period. Congrats and Good luck dear Poetess Nardline Sanderson.
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Sir williamsji, i appreciate your love and support, in my short time here you have been carefully watering thy soil for flowers to grow, i appreciate, respect the great man you are, and dear friend you have become, much love nardine xoxo
I am not yet a POET, but like to believe as an emotional dog who never bark at any one, even if the crowd throw stones, so obedient, so loyal and honest, and I never discriminate, because I was born in a country where the Great Mahatma was born, struggled and killed for his country. My Late Mom had taught me to show my next cheek, even if an enemy slap me first, Thanks for your comments on my verses,
Regards WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Please explain how this comment connects to my work, feels like another public slap to my face, BOLD LETTERING , i know you are not at all friendly towards me right now, you take away my name upon addressing me, no longer love & regard williamsji, just plain Regards WILLIAMSJI MAVELI, why claim not to be a poet? I will continue to write much love and respect to you sir williamsji, because obviously i mean it, take care xoxo love nardine
Dear Nardine,
There is nothing connected with your work, Please do not think or assume that I am not friendly with you. I made the above comment in general. Sometimes, I could not catch up with my appreciation/comment writings, You are sincere and broad-minded poetess and you are always posting very positive comments on my poems, I do appreciate that. Good Luck, God Bless
With much love to you, dear Poetess Nardine Sanderson
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI