Respiration

I hear flutes playing at eleven o'clock
A wave draws back to the moon
Petals divide to reveal hidden butterfly wings
And the air smells like the beginning of new things
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A fresh kind of sunlight fills a pristine sky all the way to noon
I'm energised in a way I hadn't been for a very long time
The horizon greets me with many amens
As I declare halleluyahs
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I frame it in my mind a visage sublime
Breakthrough's changed my fate
Doors that were closed superceded by windows open
It's an Edenic rebirthing
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It may as well be the pearly gates
Tomorrow here I come with gladness
The storm has finally passed
A second wind infills at last
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Comments
This is a good write, very visual. Nice job with your wording
Many thanks for the encouragement
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Hi Al. I agree with Pure. This is really good! Px💜
Thanks Pratibha
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😁 I like reading your stuff!
I will need to catch up on any others that I can x
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As I am on pause from my normal life right now (mum is in hospital so lots of thumb-twiddling), I have been writing on overdrive to kill the time. 😅
Wow!! AL!!,
A truly amazing "Breath Of Fresh Air"......fantastic imagery revealed by VERY lovely word choices that make up the fabric of truly beautiful phrasing ~
~ "Petals divide to reveal hidden butterfly wings
And the air smells like the beginning of new things..."
You must be having a Wonderful day my friend.....I pray that you are.... for this is simply beautiful!!....ALL STARS!! & PINNED!!......Bravo!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
Thanks Tony
It's wonderful 'on the inside' 😉
SHALOM