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Response.

Response.

When you examine all man can create

There is so much all of us can celebrate

From the fabric of society, arts and culture

To scientific research offering a better future

Why do some not appreciate what's for all ?

Why do some want to see everything fall ?

Having hatred and resentment in their hearts

Wishing to see what we have done come apart

Listening to preachers who manipulate religion

It is they, not us, who should change their opinion !

Extremists offer nothing but a return to past misery

Let's destroy them, their beliefs and progress in unity.

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sparrowsong

Hello Richard...

You did to me again...

I had to read this one a few times too...

Great write!

If I were to comment the parts I like I would have only repeated everything you wrote...

Thank you for sharing...

Hug!:)

sparrowsong

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Bradford

Hey Richard.  A great write.  Humanity could change but the people have to change first . A new president is not the solution and religion is not the problem  ,it is the extremists on every religion that put a shame of the ultimate goal of peace and good will to all . There is always going to be a few nuts who screw everything up for the rest of us  . Hugs to you rock 

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Richard Waters

Faith can not be used as a cover for evil to carry out despicable atrocities.
Religion is about love, peace and unity ! No one should listen to radical views from preachers who promote anything but these !
Best wishes ! :)

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Bradford

I agree with you Richard.  Feel my hug .rock

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Cleo Tomi Olajide

Great write Richards, Well written with a very clear message. I loved this line"Extremists offer nothing but a return to past misery". Thanks for sharing. Cheers.

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Richard Waters

So pleased you liked this write !

Best wishes !  :)

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Tony Taylor

Captain, my captain!!.........am I sensing anger in this piece?...........I can TOTALLY understand where that may be coming from...........I spend ALOT of time learning, reading, researching, and writing a blog to vent and educate.........but I keep coming up against the same problematic conversations and technological misunderstandings by those who can't see truth if it bit them in the ass...........it's interesting that I keep my anger out of my poetry..........but not everyone is a Richard Waters..........you're an awesome soul .......and I know my understanding of you is only a cyber-understanding..........but.........I can read between the lines as well most...........stay cool brother.........and keep 'em comin' !!!..........smiles..........T xo

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Richard Waters

So pleased you like my work !

Best wishes to you always !  :)

Hug.

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