revamp (powerless) you render me undone.
You render me powerless,
like a song without a note,
you said that you love me,
Your hands around my throat,
my insides frozen,
no sensation,
Just numb,
to think that I loved you, made me blind, made me dumb,
The chains you wounded around me still stained upon my skin,
but my heart it keeps on beating,
So you really didn't win
to think that I loved you, made me blind, made me dumb,
I fought back against your cruelty , against your ruling thumb,
Took back my love, im not blind, im not dumb,
My heart it keeps on beating,
So you really didn't win
My heart it keeps on beating,
For me i truly won,
Escaped thy cruelty,
Thy ruling thumb,
You rendered me powerless,
But you i overcome,
Like a bird I'll keep on singing,
With the rising morning sun,
My heart it keeps on beating,
The joys in every note.
a song within my own rights,
The song inside my throat,
my heart it keeps on beating,
So you really didn't win
No chains around me,
No more stains upon my skin.
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Pitiable condition of love laden soul...everything is out of repress yet morbid fatigue governs,..."my inside frozen, no sensation, Just numb,.."...."to think that i loved you, made me blind, made me dumb, The chains you wounded around me still stained upon my skin,".....nice expression...allegoric....lovely...with love...xx Ravindra Kumr XX
Thank you sweetheart ravindra , was Rachel Gardiner who placed the idea of this poem becoming a song, I'm happy with the outcome, much love to you dear for your appreciation, nardine xx
Dear Nardine,
This is like a good song, If music is added, this will be nice to hear, Amazing, My applause, My vote
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you kindly sir williamsji, my daughters and I are arranging some music, in hopes to bring this write to life, much appreciated and love to you for your continued support, nardine xoxo
Thank you princess, much love and appreciation to you sweetie Piusha Singh xoxo nardine xx