The Reversal Of Mars And Venus
She's so free
To be he,
Him blossoming
Into a her,
Society pushing belief
Of an understanding, these things
Naturally occur.
I've been miles in my shoes
And even I am a bit confused,
But wrong or right
To troubled individuals it finally feels right;
Freedom comes in transition
Planets aligned
Then reposition,
Some out of space
Developing while lost, float through a dark place.
Iam a man who can honestly say
Wouldn't mind seeing life through a woman's eyes
If for a week ,or just a day
That makes me a man being comfortable
With these God given hands,
I even bet a woman would even think the same.
We function in a world
Who claims:
You can be anything you want to,
Then why not a man turned woman
Or woman becoming man?
It is their right though simple minds can't understand.
I don't see...how it affects you or me,
When within......true selves trapped~scream,
If this is what being yourself is all about
I look past the unusual to the insides, where....it all... counts.
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Transsexuality is still that great misunderstood within the world of sexuality, due to that many transgender people who prefer to go unnoticed within sexual choice. I really like the composition, approaches the subject with seriousness and rigour, but think that a transsexual always sees the world through the eyes of this being that it carries inside, the physical changes are an option, but not a trigger for to feel male or female, the physicist, even if they are in accordance with the psyche, has nothing to do with the inside.
A greeting.
Hi Lucas thank you so much. I agree with you and that was my main focus, you can change your appearance and surroundings but you cannot change who you are on the inside. Enjoyed reading your comment, you are a wise man. My Love and Respect.
Tough subject Devon, you handled this very gently
It raises so many theories about life itself
I've a question to ask, does the human soul make a male
Or a female, or just the outta body?
I do often wonder myself if this confusion
Is in any way a connection to a past life
A reborn soul who has already lived throughout time
As the opposite sex, it's a possibility
Nominating a possess of deep lingering
Not feeling 100% of either sex, when In reality
Scientists discovered that a simple imbalance between chromosomes
The x and the w is likely why
Eventually the person indicted recognizes
A sence of belonging to one or the other
Making that life changing decision, in a brave attempt to be
Completely fulfilled in the world we live in
Hats off for your attention to such a process
Not all except in its entirety, well done love
Hugs, nardine xox
Wow Nardine thank you first off and second what a great question that I can only speculate on with you because the answer I haven't got a clue, but I like the reincarnation idea of a past life carrying over better than the x and y chromosomes theor. I always think what is the real reason and I believe it gets jumbled up in a religious way thatGod does not make a person that way and condones it but people are and does that necessarily make them bad? So much I could of said. Appreciate your theories on this Nardine I always like a topic of conversation and a good debate that is why I chose to write about this.goodanpossiblygoodebate that is why
Sorry about that can't write too much in comments it gets crazy. But I meant to say I love these topics and writing about them it gets a lot of different opinions and I enjoy conversation and once in a while a good debate. Much Love to you sweetheart.
Hugs Hon :) xox
Devon, high five!  you are a true Statesman brother, you said everything that needed to be said with this wit intelligence, and poetic charm,  surgical wordplay...all I can say is to quote Ray Davies of the Kinks..."girls will be boys and boys will be girls, it's a mixed up, muddled up, shook up world except for Lola lo lo lo..." cheers pal...pure poetry...oh you are so good!  have a nice day
Christopher thanks brother! Truly a great compliment and the Kinks reference to lola made me smile and that song actually had them banned from playing in England I believe but a great song to theme this write to. Thanks again man.
Hello Devon...
This write brought up a sensitive subject...
Too many people have been tormented several different ways...
Some have been beaten to death...
Some have been so confused and rejected...
Maybe, if someone tried to understand instead of calling them names and other horrific acts...
Brings me to the babies who are born as female and male...
They are either left in orphanages, badly abused through their childhood, they can't explain why they were born different in Gym class...
Attacks from many different directions...
Some parents make the wrong decision when it comes to surgery...
Do they make the baby a boy or a girl or leave it alone?
Sometimes the plan backfires and the boys grow up to be more feminine because the female gene was stronger, but they didn't wait long enough to see...
Now you have boys with women breadts, vocal, stare and now more surgeries...
Vice versa when they operate and the female grows up to be more masculine...
God never makes mistakes when He creates us...
People say God must have hated me...
Under everything we all are male and female...
Some people are just more intune with who they really are...
They are brighter than a world who doesn't have the knowledge...
BECAREFUL of what we judge...
When you understand things because you take the time...
Special friendships are made and more lives are saved and...
You could missing out out from knowing one sweetest people in the world...
Different is misunderstood and very harsh brutality come on the scene...
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
My apologies typo...
Men can have woman's breast, vocals can be higher, and their bodies are more female stature...
There have been men who out of a rare gene can have woman's breast naturally and they usually will opt for surgery to have them removed...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Sparrowsong everything you said I can see how heartfelt and touched by this write all of these tragedies and misunderstandings done to people who are different. I also love the different perspective of people messing with the sex of their child which I can definitely see that causing confusion in the sexuality of an individual great point. Don't worry about the typos I understood everything you were saying. Thank you so much sweet soaring soul.
Holy Crap Devon!!.............I can't believe I didn't know you posted this...........I think you already know what I think about the brilliance of this piece..........but.........I would like to add one little thing........."..though simple minds can't understand.." ~ is the "genius" glue ~ Â that makes this an "Off The Charts" piece!!!.........so good my friend..........major high fives!!............later bro!!..........T xo
Yo T thanks a lot my friend! Always a pleasure to have you comment even though you knew this was coming i did send you a final draft just couldn't hold on any longer and I appreciate your help it really put this all together. Im glad you pointed out that line T it was in reference to people who live in the old world of black and white and cannot adjust to this new a different ways of life. Much love to you and tons of respect brother. Ttyl.
Hi Devon . I have never understood why some men would dress as women or want to change into a woman but I am not the business of judging people . People have the write express themselves even if I disagree . I don't hold grudges . A great write from a great poet . Cheers hrlÂ
Hey Hardrock thanks so much for that comment you brought an honored grin to this face. Ill tell you truth I still judge it is a hard habit to break but im trying to understand and I realize it hurts nobody what one or a few people do that defines them. Much love and appreciation to you brother.
Loved it.
Thank you.