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Rhythmic Poem (FIRST ATTEMPT AT A SOMEWHAT RHYMING POEM)

Roses are dead, 

Violets are crying,

Every heart is vying to silence, 

One day at home, 

The next day alone, 

When will you prove to me that you won't condone, 

This sense of carelessness, 

A virtue at most, 

You broke me in two and only,

You care about you. 

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Valerie Beasley...

Hi Ashley!  I can so relate to this write!  Your first attempt is good as well as your imagery and the emotional content.  Do you like rhyming?  If so, there are many ways to rhyme.  The easiest is rhyming couplets or the monorhyme.  

val

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Ashley Bean

Thanks! I don't write many poems with rhymes, but I do write a ton of poems with gutsy emotions. If you like that type of poem, I can for sure write more! 

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Valerie Beasley...

Yes, I do like poems with "gutsy" emotions.  I am an emotional writer as well.  I also enjoy writing complicated rhymes such as sonnets.

val

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