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riGHt?

you'Re nOt deaD...riGHt?
TheY kEEp tellinG Me thiS
JUSt goNe tHey sAy... gonE
NoT dEAd, Just moVed On

sO, tHere's nO proBlem...righT??
RePeat thrEE timeS aT niGht
You'rE noT deaD, yoU're jUst
goNe
So iTs aLL All aLL RighT

You'Re wiTh gOD...rigHt???
AnD he'S heRe witH mE toO
I cAn't See hiM, noR yoU,
IΒ muSt bELIEVeΒ 
CoS it'S tRue

YOU're nOt dEaD...RighT????
ThEy keeP teLLing mE thiS
NeVeR deAd dEad... NOt GoNe,
OnLY fuCKinG moVeD oN

So you're not dead...riGHt?????

M P 29/8/21

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Gwendoline

I know this feeling lovely, you penned it perfectly. The frustration and utter torture grief wields at the brain, that desperately wants to make sense of it and can't. How the heart breaks every time we grapple with the logic of death. Cos it never feels logical πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’– hugs xxΒ 

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Marion

Thankyou Gwen...for taking the time my friend ❀

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Jill Tait

Awww brilliantly penned my lovely friend 🌹❀️🌹

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Marion

Thanks Jill❀

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Jill Tait

πŸ’•β€οΈπŸ’•

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Neville

Misery just aint an option, is it Marion .. Original & very much to the point .. These word sure do resonate .. Well poemed my friend .. Neville x

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Marion

Well...they say its up to us how we choose to feel but for me anyway...emotions have always come from a place deeper than my head and this place will not be controlled by thought. I suspect it might be like that for many πŸ˜”πŸ˜Œ thankyou x

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Marion

πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

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