WITH THIS RING......
A band of truth
A circle of love
An ownership claim
An advertisement to the world
With this ring I own you
I promise to cherish you
I pledge to take care of you
I hope what I say is true
With this band
I tie you down
I claim you till death
I might even defer to you
With this circle
I encompass you
I collar you
I put my all in you
I must hold on to you
Upon your eager finger I set my hopes
My future is you
And it is now we
With words that are uttered
With anxious pride
I commit and swear
An oath of infinity
That might be
A noose imbued with animosity
The future is bright
It is time for the party
We share our love
We are blessed by god above
May patience outlast our momentary love
The ritual of prostrating to society
Is now over
Living has sunk in
Life mirrors fantasy only occasionally
Love dims
Commitment holds
Cataloguing begins
Circle of random joy
Circle of probable eventual reprove
Circle of unspoken responsibility
Circle of expectant continuity
Circle of overwhelming obligation
To one that is to be loved
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Comments
I really like the honesty here Evrod, the depths of ones love goes beyond a ring upon a finger, although the ring holds much responsibility to honeymooning and beyond, a life long commitment, sadly some do not take seriously, or i wouldn't be a divorcée lol, stuck his ring where the sun always shinned , up his own behind,
i appreciate this write for everything it is and stands for, well done xoxo
thank you.. im not even married wrote last night on a bus while reading a book about guy divorced who was having two affairs .. his lover was musing about the guys lack of a ring and when did it come off and what he did with it.. his wife took him to the cleaners as she should lol
My ex never wore his ring, until i left him about a week it lasted on his finger then, if he wanted a marriage of convenience, theirs always mail order brides, or a frying pan lol
lol... i wish society would get rid of the till death do us part mentality... in uk the tories seem to like marriage until we realise from the papers they all swingers...lol... i think if you cant get along divorce. my ex got married.. i asked is it immigration as partner was foreign .. said love.. i thought omg are u mad... disintegrated so much police got involved on both occassions when they got back and not only that he changed his bed linen the partner didnt like so changed the linon on the side of bed they slept.... i though jesus christ lol