RiNg riNg RING...
come viSiT with me soon
sHe
said, MayBe, sometime
WHen
I'm not in bed, though my
hEAd
fEEls sO So heavy all the
tiMe
I really should get Up and
oUT
absorb wHat
LiFe
Is aLL about, bUT
mY
body feels so HeaVY
aLLÂ
The timE
I hate myself for
WhAT
I am, A useless piece of
tEArfUL
Spam, a faKe, a bricK, A
bURdeN
on you all
I really want to
fEEl
something, to laugh and sing
wiTH
frieNdsS and kiN, but my
sOUl
Is broke in
PieCeS
on the floor
I went to see heR on
ThAt
DaY, found blood oN
PilloWS
where she lay, her
hEaD
SO heavy, tangled hair and
WiDE
eyed glaSsy glassY stare
Her heart so
BuRDeNed
beAt no more, her milk white
sKiN
slashed blood reD
RaWÂ
her mobile phone
sTilLÂ
rinGinGÂ on the floor
Marion Price (2020)
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Ohhh..... oh this is very, very sad. I have just been reading poetry on another sight nd there was a well written one about suicide there that I commented on (plus one on here earlier) and now I read this. So sad and well written, Marion. Although I know this is true for many, I hope this is purely from your creative mind x
I have experienced the suicide of a very close family member years ago Tina but these words are not a documentation of that...no...thankyou love ?
Awwwww so sad luv but sheer brilliance so had to pin for perfection ??â¤ď¸
Thankyou as always lovely lady...hugs ?
((((BIG HUGS)))â¤ď¸
Felt them..? same back ???
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Aww such a heartbreaking poem and you depicted her plight and end in such a touching perfect, moving way, so eloquently with feeling. Kudos and may she be in a happier place where she will never be a burden. I hope it wasn't suicicide though . Kudos!!!
plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
Hi Zaynab...no this is not about anybody in particular though I have experienced the sadness of a loved ones suicide in the past. Thankyou so much for taking the time...hugs ?