Roadkill

You kept them cooped up,
ripening in their cigarette packets.
Fleshless, cracked and empty shells,
breathless rodent jaws, a rabbitβs
sun-bleached, eviscerated skull β
transient roadkill the dogs dragged in.
Yet once clambering out
from your driverβs seat,
you stood fawn-helpless and mesmerized
by the oil-slick glow of tail-light,
staring at the obliterated viscous form
youβd laid public by the kinetic highway,
shamefully still on the desecrate
nettle-bed. Splayed, steaming, still bounding β
re-bounding on its side. Fallen pilgrim
on this road to Damascus.
And so, you let loose the dogs to tear
the remains of this nightly exodus
off the dented metal grill
as though the flesh of Jezebel.
Β© A.T. 2020
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As a poet that is just starting out I take the time to read every comment and really appreciate your feedback! Please drop me a line if you have a minute... thanks a.t.
Imaginative. Articulated in masterful proportions of visual expertise. Inspired. Glad to have read. I'm so richer for it.
Thank you so much! I am so glad that you liked it ~ a.t.Β
Wow!! A.T...β¦..VERY powerful phrasing that brings to life some TOTALLY graphic imagery for the 'minds eye' to feast upon!! (smiles)β¦β¦.Well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered darkness!!β¦..Road Kill ~ to say the least!!β¦...ALL STARS!!β¦.well done dear poet Brother?/Sister?.....and.....WELCOME to COSMO!!β¦...LOVE & ROCKETS!!β¦β¦.T xoΒ : )
Ps. Those are my initials as well!! (more smiles)
Thank you Tony Taylor! I really appreciate your comment and itβs nice to know that someone else is into the same sort of poetry as I am ~ a.t. (the best initials, hehe)Β
awesome write well done. outstanding cadence.
Thank you so much!