Poem - 31 March 2015, 14:17

Romeo loves Juliet (rewritten)

Love is not hate
The forum has swords
Cupid has spoken
Watch all your words
Lovers are running
The bugles are playing
Here come the horses
And all the naysaying
Romeo loves Juliet
From this love apparent
Love inappropriate
The feelings abhorrent
How dare this love
It must cease immediate
The town says enough
Of Romeo the idiot
Shake spear and fight
The night has begun
Run with your Juliet
So that love shall finally be won

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Affection

Poetry Genre:

Romance

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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI31 March 2015, 23:00

Hi Jai Masters,

Good and romantic, I liked your above verse and the lines below,

The town says enough
Of Romeo the idiot
Shake spear and fight
The night has begun
Run with your Juliet
So that love shall finally be won

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Jai Masters31 March 2015, 23:05

hello Williams, it makes me happier than you know

to have you read my poem, my brain makes the words

and my soul makes everything else; so I am wondering

if you are part of my soul! Poetry is life!

Thank you for your time! Best wishes Jai :)