Poem -
Roses
“Above All” collection
Darkness has fallen,
Down the deserted town,
When the roses appear,
Beneath the glorious crown.
Long-stemmed red,
Isolated from reality,
Inevitable to the roaring wind,
Gentle to the moonlight.
Exquisite in their scent,
Spreading across the land,
Attracts nearby passengers,
Into the wildest dreams.
Slowly, they bloom,
Unnoticed by the restless waves,
Uncared by the frantic world,
But still, they stand.
Red and creamy,
The petals suddenly fall.
The end of a lifetime.
Too soon to endure.
The sun rises,
Behind the greenish hills,
Marking a new day,
While the roses depart.
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Comments
Hello PHAM,
This has such a lovely softness to its overall tone that it seems to float ever so sweetly from the tongue when spoken aloud.....a fine piece of poetic prose filled with lovely imagery and phrasing!!.....ALL STARS!!...well done dear poet brother.....and.....in case no one has said so.....WELCOME to COSMO!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
PS. sorry I couldn't leave stars, something wrong with the system (again)Â : (
Thank you very much for your opinion!
Its phrasing like this that really builds your theme and reinforce the feeling you are trying to create. Very cleverly and decisively structured! Pinned! Kudos my friend. TFOTS
Thank you very much! :))