Rows Upon Rows Of Clouds
Rows...upon rows...
Of clouds,Â
In rows....
Sitting afloatÂ
ducks in a-
Controllers of mood,
But today
In broken quantityÂ
fluffy on display
bringing out earth'sÂ
sky like bright blue.
      Forever rows....
Spying periwinkle canvas
till eyes give up
in miles unseen,
Goofy thinking
that up there
a factory producing thousandsÂ
of giant's comfortable pillows.
Oh how the sun
thankful for rows...upon rows....
Can take broken up breaks
from brightly grinning,
Relief is sweet
balancing that smiling heat
rows.....upon rows....of-
insulated cotton balls
slowly dabbing the baby blue firmament.
Rows....upon rows....
Of clouds, a maze
trapping without escapeÂ
an old admirer's sight,
Not a dreamer's visual in
ancient unimaginable night.
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A VERY interesting observation D.........and a fine display of the growing poetic prose you've been pumping out lately!!.......... so proud of you D!!........keep 'em coming......... you have so much to contribute to the world of poetry!!.......... your cyber-friend and admirer.........T xo
Why thank you my friend and admirer. Iam truly honored to hear that, I absolutely love prose man lol. I plan on contributing for as long as the written word means anything, if you know what I mean T. Peace brother.
Hi Devon a lovely poem about the cloudsÂ
lovely sweet words "fluffy"Â "spying periwinkle,"
"Giants comfortable pillows" i could go on and on
all describing a part of nature,
I thought this was gorgeous a fav
for me Best wishes DebsÂ
Thank you Debs. Hope your enjoying being ambassador, I remember how exciting it was when it was my turn. I put a little humor into this one and tried to think out of the box. When I saw the way the puffy cumulus clouds were in a row yesterday stretching on and on forever it was so beautifully inspiring I started this write. All my best to you.
Love this :
a factory producing thousandsÂ
of giant's comfortable pillows.
Awesome write
Hey man thats what my goofy humorous mind was thinking when I saw those rows of clouds lol. Thanks Mark that was my favorite too.Â
Hi Devon,
A very beautiful write. It reminds me of when I used to fly (gave it up in '87) and look down to the fluffy white clouds, which looked, as you say, like "giant comfortable pillows". Well done.
Peace and Love,
xox Larry
How you doin Larry my man? Wow you use to fly thats pretty cool. I wouldn't mind learning to fly and im sure you have your own awesome cloud imagery tucked away up there from flying. Most pilots say how cool it is to slice through the clouds, but iam glad you and most everyone who commented liked my favorite part which was the factory producing giant's pillows lol. Felt silly writing this one but that is all the fun shaking up and doing something different. Love and peace be with you my friend.