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Tony Taylor

Hey JULIE LUCAS!!...... this is a VERY clever piece...... great formatting here REALLY added to its impact....... well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!.......ALL STARS!!....... and....... WELCOME to COSMO!!..'.... LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo.Β  ?βœ³βœ΄β˜€

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julie lucas

Thankyou

Think of a lotΒ of stuff but rarely write much original work, not for 34 years, whilst all the while, words and phrases chase each other around my head, I thought I would catch some of them and thought this would be a good place to write them down .gets things off the chest so to speak.Thank you to whoever is responsible for the site... it's a real pleasure ... I am loving reading all the fantastic, original poems xx

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Lorna

I really enjoyed this, lovely piece x

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