RUBY KISSES + SCARLET SINS
You dreamed of me last night
I know this...
i heard your heart speak
whispers
i sucked your ruby kiss
i wore your sweating
passioned skin
we dreamed a night of bliss...
bodies...
traced and laced in bold
embracing tight in passions
hold
and all the petals on the rose
bled deeper reds the sins to
hold...
frenzied urgent, touch me
there...
in dreams...
in scenes...
we... both laid bare...
you tasted me as scents anew
I tasted you...
oh, I tasted you...
frenzied urgent hold on tight
ride me high this sinful
night...
exploding...
waves in crashing pulse
bodies climbing heights of
love
shuddered wails and moans
and lust
skins ablaze with red hot
touch...
frenzied, urgent, don't let go
these dreams I love, I crave
them so...
and all the petals
on the rose
blushed scarlet
at the sins so bold...
frenzied frenzied ..don't let
go...I need you now...in
dreams to hold..frenzied
urgent, hold on tight...ride with
me in dreams this night...
You dreamed of me last night
I know this
I dreamed you too...
Marion Price (2020)
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Holy Cow Girlfriend!!......you are capable of incredible variety in your ability to write in any genre.....you stand among the few who ~ given any subject matter ~ can simply create at will!!......this is a sizzling representation of the heights you can reach with words......seriously.....amazing!......you're the kind of writer who could make a fortune writing on a daily TV series that requires daily 'off the cuff' contribution.......PINNED for perfection dear poet sister!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo : )
Ha ha...lol...I've not had any offers yet Tony...back to the bloody day job then...or night job in my case!! Seriously though thankyou for your amazing comment...I don't often write about love having boxed it neatly away and hidden it in a basement on an island nobody will ever find!! Still...this is desire and lust so that's ok then 😆...💕
What the others have said is enough said, I just wanted to say that although definitely not my genre, I really enjoyed this poem (and that's really saying something) so very talented you are Marion! Kind regards. The Fish of the Sea.
Hi Mr Fish ..thankyou for reading and commenting my friend. I don't usually write on such subjects either, having said that I go where my mind takes me ...from murder to mayhem to flowers and animals, children, depression, moons and once even a coat rack...lol...I like to write about all things from a variety of perspectives because life is about all things from all different perspectives...hugs 💕
Write whatever you like Marion! This is a clear example of the talent you express in a huge variety of poetic genres! No matter what I always enjoy your writes. Kind regards. The Fish of the Sea.
Great romantic write Marion, enjoyed this amazing piece. Cheers!
Hi Cleo thankyou so much my friend...💕
Incredible
I hope you don't mean in a bad way ...lol...thankyou Kamilla 💕
Ouch... Burnt myself... This is HOT! It simply sizzles. And you know what? It is not just the words that make this a sizzler. The words are fabulous and they are strung together on a very sexy thread but it is the pacing that does it. As you read it the poem speeds up. You bring it to the boil. You have a glorious crescendo and then, at the end it slows again. This has to be one of the sexiest poems I have ever, ever read! It is deliciously decadent, and gloriously passionate, and wonderfully romantic and PERFECTLY expressed. My god this is brilliant 😮
And Oh yes, I forgot to say, I LOVE it ❤️ x
So you like it then?? You seem.unsure 😆😆 Seriously...WOW!!! What a comment...I am so...thrilled actually!! Thankyou so much Tina...wasn't sure how this would go down. Course I had to read a book cos personally I never do stuff like this 😆😆...hugs lovely lady 💕
Oh of course.. Yes... A book 🙄 Whatever you say, Marion 🤣🤣 What colour was the book? It wasn't silver was it? Or dove? Charcoal? Any shade of grey? Please don't say it was called Mrs Myrtle Gets Down In The Library 🙏 x
Not telling 🤣🤣🤣🤣😆
It wasn't a book was it! 😉 Say no more!
I was joking with you Tina...lol...I've got two kids I've had sex....twice 🤩🤩🤩
What, no practise runs? I found the practise runs needed lots of practise 🤣🤣
Nope...i.was nearly a virgin giving birth...I've had three partners since then so I'm kind of like half a virgin now...pure as the snow that falls on Wales via the steel works! 😇😇😂
Well, yeah, put like that, it does sound like you may be half virgin. But judging by your poem the other half is pure tiger 🐯🐅 x
Just to add: I am more like a lioness. I tend to be a bit lazy until I get hungry and see something I like... And then I pounce quickly so he can't run away x
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You really should get that seen to...I know what that's like...lol..or maybe write a poem about it?? 🤗
Perhaps I should get it seen to. On the other hand maybe I just need to get my claws sharpened... Or maybe not 🤔 hmmm... What to do 🤔 x
I miss having a but of fun on here...I have ordered Cherie to bring Matthew back...lol...I miss his banter...night love 🤗🤗
Me too. The banter is fun. Night, night x
Night love 🤗
Mrs Myrtle gets down in the library??? Lol lol 🤣🤣🤣 is there seriously a book called that??? Lol oh lol...shades of grey ?? I didn't get passed the first page...it bored me senseless! My friends and I read The Story of O at age 14...might have spoilt it for me...lol 😆🤣🤗🤗
Hahaha.... Never heard of Mrs Myrtle's antics in the library? What she did in the Classics section was unreal! She thought that Homer's Odysee was a certain type of 'act' that required a great deal of dexterity. (The sort of flexibility unheard of in an octogenarian.) And the Pilgrims Progress was an altogether different kind of journey. And Wuthering Heights was the pinnacle any sex maniac aspired too! Goodness me, Mrs Myrtle Gets Down In The Library has a great many happy endings x
Sounds brilliant and very informative....lol...I'm.going to have to do some research!!! I've never been much for the classics to be honest...but to be fair...it sounds hot!! ...I'm.there!! 😆😆😆
Definitely hot... But very musty lol... (but that could just be Mrs M's knickers) x
great romantic work well done
Hi Liliana...thanks so much love 💕
Ooooh u awful pml but I like you bloody brilliant!!!! & pinned for perfect passion ❤️❤️❤️
Well.like I said to Tina...I had to read up on it...you know...s...e....x...cos I don't do it...never have...heavens forbid 😇😇😇😆....thanks as ever for your support Jill...hugs 💕
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The end of autumn is much like a steamy summer! What a wild lust "dream" ;))
Lol...thanks Yiyan...appreciated 😊😊