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SACRIFICE

And
Breath
Gave
Life
ToĀ 
Breath
WhichĀ 
Stopped
TheĀ 
Life

Though

Breath
Lived
OnĀ 
InĀ 
TheĀ 
Life
ThatĀ 
Stopped
The
Breath.

Marion Price(2020)
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Marion

Thanks Jill...reworked and finished now. You ok?? Im off to catch up with yours...hugs ?

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Violet Freese

I liked this. Marion it fliwed well with the formatting....great write

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Marion

Hi violet...thankyou so much for reading and commenting love...I'm off to catch up with yours ?

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Marion

Hi Violet thankyou so much for reading and commenting love...I'm off to catch up on yours now ?

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Richard Waters

" Martyr to a cause. " Sacrificing much to be remembered. Life, changed in the instance liberty was exchanged for the " fame " of collective responsibility.
" It is a hell-of a thing, taking a life " !
" You, take away all they have. And, all they will ever have. " UNFORGIVEN.
Life, is priceless. Life, must only be ceased, in the name of justice or humanity. Without remorse.
The want of more for yourself, without REGRET, must make clear the correct policy. Towards others. AND, " THE LIVING YEARS " !
Be true. Be bold, but, brazen in affirming THE RIGHT VALUES.Ā 
For, yourself.....as well as others.
Together, we live. Divided, you die.
POWERFUL. SIMPLE, EFFECTIVE " STATE ", OF AFFAIRS.Ā Ā Ā 

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Marion

Thankyou Richard for putting so much thought and effort into your lovely comment...poetry in itself...appreciated my friend ?

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