Poem -
Saturday
Only in a man'sÂ
Heaven,
That one dayÂ
be all days
in an eternity of love,
Waking to taste
relishing night's end
not waste
our always...flavor of the month.
Walking on thin clouds
you, me
never tired
but always ready for sleep,
Work-
A distant memoryÂ
and no future thought.....
When floating on^^^^^
loveliness highs
any other thoughtsÂ
we spare nothing to time.
So,
it's the same day insanityÂ
periods of time repeatÂ
used,
Achieving body numb flawless-
nessÂ
out of imperfect love,
No mind the frozen line
drawn through sands; My dearÂ
we're livingÂ
the best day
of all years.
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Hey DEVON!!......I DO believe it's possible to create one's own heaven....... brings to mind that song by the band "CHICAGO" called "Saturday In The Park"........a never ending ~ perfect day ~ spent with those whom you Love and those who Love you........ you mapped out some elegantly broad strokes here..... I'd Love to be able to see into your minds eye!! (lol!)........ because "Achieving body numb fearlessness.." is most intriguing brother poet......... some very cool phrasing here.... well done captain!!...... Love and Rockets!!........T xo
Well, I do say when you can feel it in your soul those are cherished memories that can be frozen in the time of your heaven. Interested in my mind's eye huh, me too lol. It opens and closes, I feel like it is ideas of sheer genius and then ideas from the creature of habit lol. Thanks man iam flattered by your comment, your the man T and im looking forward to your ideas on that write. What does your mind's eye think. Peace.
Hi Devon, this poem is beautiful. To me it means how a special person can make a day a very special day, a moment a very special moment, we are the ones that put the magic to the days and to the moments.
I absolutely love this line:Â it's the same day insanityÂ
periods of time repeat
Brilliant !
Thank you Vani. Our days can be governed by the ones we love sometimes and those moments that are special can be frozen in the mind's heaven foerever. I appreciate you reading and commenting on my write, my love and respect.
Hi Devon,
Saturday. Such a special one, the work week ended, with one day of rested respite. For the next, many work on their Heavenly vows. But for that one day, freedom of choice, lovers couple, float to the stars, whisper eternal "I love yous", pledging their souls for all time.
Peace and Love, Brother Poet,
xox Larry
And those days Larry can be few and far between so they are immensely cherished. I appreciate the love brother poet and the wonder comment. Peace my friend.