An Angels Grace
You are sent to show us all that is better
To lead us down a path to enlightenment
To give man the chance of forging a future
Where we achieve all that has been dreamt.
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You, the angel, to lead this world to unity.
To save so many millions with your grace
To do all you possibly can for humanity,
Will make sure smiles appear on every face.
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There has been too much bloodshed and tears
Now you can create a true heaven on earth
By destroying those who exacerbate fears,
Those, of evil, who appreciate nothing of worth.
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Creating the greatest army ever to be seen,
To rid us of those promoting hate and division,
You will show what should have always been.
To win us an everlasting peace is your mission.
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A vision that is very positive for the future of humanity, but I believe that are many centuries of evil, wars, crime, Vice and misery without never ever God has said nothing, I think that there is no future or hope for anyone and there is paradise for spirits pure and noble would not be inhabited by people, but by the animals , the victims of the creation.
God or the devil you do not live in Paradise far away are within the mind and heart of the mortals and in those two places are the keys to eternal perdition or salvation of the soul.
I have written a novel that speaks of that, Electra Jones is the star, the Earth will be destroyed by a superior kind, hundreds of capital ships gather the elect from the planet, Electra Jones is on that list of people chosen for salvation but decides to stay with the Hospice system, says Electra Jones while the capital ships loaded to the righteous.
"My people are here and here is my land, I will try to change the fate of the planet, but if I don't get it and I destroyed the earth I will destroy with it"
A greeting.
Always nice to read your appraisal of, and insight into, my efforts !
Wishing you all the best ! :)
Hey Richard. A wonderful write of the upcoming victory when Jesus makes His triumphant return to restore peace on this earth once and for all . Hugs to you rock
A lasting peace for all will allow creativity and progress. Prejudice and hate lead to conflict and war resulting in only destruction and a perpetuation of the cycle of violence. When those preaching the politics of division and extremist views are shown to be liars and shams only concerned with their own interests and not in what is good for all then the world will become a fairer place to live.
Best wishes to you my friend. :)
Hi Richard, when I read some of your compositions first thing I always find is that they are very well written and I study the composition, Tony Taylor says I do dissection with poems, hahahahahahaha, not is that exactly, you can not dissect is the soul, I simply look at them and then I pour the emotions that I am inspired by the composition.
Responses that accompany a publication act as an extension of the original composition, I try that my answers, apart from Nice are also worthy of the subject matter.
A salute to both.
Thank you for appreciating the effort I put into my poems. I am never truly content with how they are and strive to become a better writer with each piece I do.
Once again, thank you for leaving your appraisal of my works. This input is most welcome in my attempt to progress, as it is from feedback that you know where you are going as a writer ! :)
Take care my friend. :)
Thank you for appreciating the effort I put into my poems. I am never truly content with how they are and strive to become a better writer with each piece I do.
Once again, thank you for leaving your appraisal of my works. This input is most welcome in my attempt to progress, as it is from feedback that you know where you are going as a writer ! :)
Take care my friend. :)
Jorge Luis Borges used to say the same thing says Richard of his poems, Borges claimed that to write well had to write much editing and throwing many writings into the trash can, I do not think alike, writing is an act of love not vanity or pride, you write so that someone on the other side read it and with that the writing comes to a single reader already would be accomplished the task of writing When it is written much, some writings leave better than others, but that does not mean that they non-deserving of someone to read them.
You write very well things and very important situations in the human nature.
A greeting to all.
I have been through a lot in my life, as have many, and I feel experiencing different situations and emotions makes you a more versatile writer with more to communicate ! A poet needs pain to really flourish some suggest. I do not wholly agree but it does seem to me that experiencing more allows you to write on more topics and connect with more people.
The readers know when a poet has been through what he or she is writing about if they have been through the same themselves. It is intuitive. I feel a poet can't manufacture emotions they have not experienced.
Best wishes to you as always ! :)
WOW RICHARD!!!!!!~ the conversation between you and Lucas was as interesting as the write itself!!........You and Lucas are both equipped with fine minds and insights.........and to follow the discussion between the two of you was so engrossing that I felt I was learning.........the write itself is inherently controversial because the subject matter itself can lead to opposing interpretations..........but the fact is.......you wrote another piece that was worthy of discussion.........it's what I LOVE about COSMO...........it's interactive and to be able to talk with other writers about something you've written is not only beneficial........but flattering.......especially for good writers like you two.............Thanx Richard.......for another terrific write.........and for the education..........it would be so awesome if we could get some of the Cosmo poets together........wow.......what a great couple of days that would be.........so many interesting and complicated souls........all together in one...........anyway, a can dream can't he?..........thanx again Richard.......so glad I went back to see what I had been missing from you lately........high fives brother!!.........T xo
So pleased you enjoyed this write and I agree on the feedback being so conducive to development of a writer. It would be great to get all the poets on Cosmo into a room to discuss approaches and perspectives on creating a piece. A creative workshop would be so beneficial I feel !!! :)
Best wishes to you as always ! :)
I always try to separate the personal emotions of fiction, but even when I write stories arise the personal experiences and mingle with the plot of the story. I agree that when they have experienced things can be expressed more easily, pain, joy, love, jealousy and heartbreak are feelings that at some point in our lives we have felt all, but thanks to the empathy you can also write situations that we have not lived never, I have not had to leave my country because of war or I had to take me to the sea on a barge to try to understand what it feels like when all known is suddenly crumbling underfoot.
You have to live to write, that is true, but it can also be written from the experiences of others.
None of us have traveled on a train of death as if we were won with destination to the slaughter, but any of us could write a composition that spoke of that horror.
Share fully the comment of Tony Taylor, when the authors exchanged ideas and discussed their creations opens thousands of windows in mind to help us grow, Edgar Allan Poe was excited when someone commented any writing published in the local Gazette, comments act as an extension of the poem, perhaps that is the reason why I always think before answering especially when a comment or you can correct or delete.
A greeting to all.
Thank you again for your insight ! You always have so much to give and I appreciate your contributions to and assessments of my work. You and your writing are an inspiration to me.
Wishing you the very best as always ! :)