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Scriptwriter

Scriptwriter

Scriptwriter.
L.M.Robbins.

He sighs at the blinking name,
Catchin’ it in his gut…
…On the fourth ring, he answers.

“Hello.”
…
“Yeah i’m fine, an’ you?”
…
“Ah, good. What? I’m not whispering…the reception is poor.”
…
“You’re breaking up…I can’t hear you. What was that?”
…
“Oh, that? It’s…yes; healed now, thanks. I’m smiling. I’ll send a pic soon.”
…
“No, it’s the reception…I’m just…far, far away.”
…
“I didn’t mean distance, I meant… it’s not important.”
…
“Yes. Like I said, i’m fine…Even you wouldn’t recognize me now.”
…
“No I can’t. I’m goin’ to stay awhile longer.”
…
“When will I come home? Soon. Maybe Christmas. I can’t say.”
…
“What was that? I can’t hear you…you’re breaking up.”
…
“Oh…Oh yes…yes. The same to you…yes.”
…
“B’bye, b’bye.”

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sally

Original and brilliantly crafted Lee Robbins 
Nice work!

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Lee Robbins

Thank you for the feedback, it’s appreciated..??✍?

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Tony Taylor

WOW!! LEE!!.... an excellent foray into the delivering of dialogue..... so well crafted that you don't even need to hear the other side of the conversation..... it's like standing hidden behind the curtain and eavesdropping!!...... Truly ~ Well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!.......ALL STARS!!......Smokin' grooves!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo ?✴❤

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Lee Robbins

Thanks TT. Really appreciate your comments..Cheers my friend??✍?✍?

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