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Gwendoline

Short, profound and to the point. Nicely done :) 

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Tony Taylor

CLEVER!!....and most succinctly powerful!!......well done....T xo  : )

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The fish of the sea

Like all your writes, extremely thought-provoking... Deepest desires, deepest importance... to sacrifice yourself for others.... Such a passionate write.

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