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SEARCHED FOR A HAPPIER LIFE

SEARCHED FOR A HAPPIER LIFE

The Train is coming an announcement from the man on the intercom...

This Train will take you all the way down the Depression Line...

If you don't board quickly, it's standing room only...

The next Train will be here in 4 Hours...

You can purchase snacks and beverages inside...

You're early someone said...

I want to board my Train promptly so I can save a seat for someone standing...

He began laughing at me...

He said that Train is never full...

That travels the Happy Line...

Goes all the way to Content...

It's never full?

No...

Any stops along the way there's no wait for anything...

The Depression Line, people shouldn't get off because, the lines fill up fast...

Why is that?

He laughs at me again...

You don't know much do you?

You don't know what it feels like to be hurt, broken, and at times you just want to kill yourself, do you?

Yes, actually I do...

You may be surprised at how often I thought about it...

Why are you here, then?

I searched for a happier life...

You met someone to make you happy?

Yes...

Myself...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

 

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Nine Eleven

To love we must first love ourselves, great piece sparrow. 

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Angel

Nicely written angel

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sparrowsong

Hello Gerard...

Yes, though even with all that love doesn't mean someone's going to love you...

Thank you for your sweet comment and support!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

 

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GREG TUCKER THE...

You should love yourself Feathers as you are the perfect little Birdie!  Great write

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sparrowsong

Hello Angel...

Thank you very much!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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Kathleen Tortolano

❤️️ Tweety,
Spokem from the heart!
as always great job!
❤️️ KATHLEEN
 

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sparrowsong

Hello Greg...

Perfect?

?

No...

Thank you for the vote of confidence, though...

Thank you for your kind comment and support!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

 

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sparrowsong

❤Hello Kathleen...

Hope you're well my friend!

Glad you enjoyed!

Thank you for your kind comment and support!

Best wishes and blessings!

Hugs...

❤Tweety

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Greg Etsell

great poem  a masterpiece some times I feel the way you do
and you have to get off that train sometimes

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sparrowsong

Hello Greg...

Thank you for your kind comment and support!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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Larry Ran

My Dear sparrowsong,

Many people's trains have left the stations
A multitude of years ago
Most with standing room available only
And teardrops all aflow

.
The tickets are just for one way
The ending of their Line
New Year's Eve they vowed that
It would be their final "Auld Lang Syne"

Love,
Larry xxx

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sparrowsong

Hello Larry...

Many also ride it everyday...

Many people live in the past...

Some actually change their future by realising everyday is a chance to start again...

It's never too late to change the road your on it just depends how comfortable they are and if they want to change it...

Thank you for your kind comment and support!

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

 

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