Poem -
Seeding Universal Love
The awe and humility
Found in pondering the stars
Beyond the stars
And in the stars' ability to create
Such beautiful dreams
In the minds of the fortunate
Where pessimism does not exist
And anything that is conceivable
Is possible
Leaving the soul bleeding
With such happy unrest
That even prayers
Feel
Insignificant
For it is in the birthright,
The inexplicable comprehension,
Of universal truth
Far beyond the minds of men
Where the spirit intuits
And nears the opportunity
To touch the face
Of God's
Single opportunity
To glimpse
Love's
Supernova
Of seeding
Throughout
All creation...
Tony Taylor
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I know you go on to say: "Such beautiful dreams"...but the key is that the ingredients for creating life (and everything else) is contained within an exploding star!!
Wonderful poem...cosmic, even!!
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J ;)
JASON!!!.....thanx SO much...... you nailed it brother....... without Supernova's occurring at precisely the correct moment throughout the universe .......there would be no life......I had to work so hard to widdle this write down to a poetic place...... where physics and cosmology didn't overwhelm the naturally occurring ballet that is our Universe.......I can't tell you how much this comment meant to me....... just knowing that you're out there...... having taken the time to understand....... was worth the crazy effort it took to sound less scientific....... sorry I'm rambling.... it just helped me breathe a sigh of relief to read your words....THANK YOU kind sir........I am indebted to you....... and most appreciative of your intellect...... as a poet and thinker....... again.......I am most grateful....... your cyber-friend and admirer.......T xo........I could say so much more........ high fives...... hugs-n-smiles .....tony ?✳✴☀
Enlightening write.....great....thx
Thanx LORRIS!!......appreciate your stopping by........ smiles.......T xo. ?✳✴☀
I truly love this piece. I love the inspirational words and how they are tied to our faith. How we cling to such grounded hope.
Beautifully done...and a keeper for me.
Thanx SOULWHISPERS!!......you're right....... Faith (in my most humble opinion) is one of the most powerful words in All of human language...... so glad you picked up on that aspect of the write .......means a lot......... hugs-n-smiles.......thanx again for this!!........T xo. ?✳✴☀
Firstly, I really love the picture....Your words brought out the beauty of the pic... They flowed beautifully....enjoyed every word in every line... Thought provoking and inspirational write....enjoyed
Thanx for noticing ROSE!!....I took some time to find that picture.......apreciate you taking time with this one girlfriend....,,,,, stay cool!!.....,,T xo. ?☀✴✳
Hi Tony, the picture complements the whole poem! Great choice ##one of my soliloquies: " dream your dreams "" I love this!! XOXO
Thanx LEAH!!......" Dream of your dreams" ~ VERY cool girlfriend........ appreciate you taking time with this one..,,,, gonna have to head to your page...... feel like I can't keep up with everything lately.......thanx so much for being cool my friend......... smiles.......T xo. ?☀✴✳♥
My Dear Brother Poet Tony,
I reach into infinity
I travel to the end of the Universe
I see Him upon His throne
I say "Dear Lord, In my life I have blasphemed
Can you forgive me?"
He turns His other cheek
Taking my hand to place upon it
I feel the true power of His love
I feel the seeds of His Creation
Peace, Love and Rockets,
Larry xxx
Hi Tony. Love the way you wrote this. My mind travelled along with each word on an inter dimensional scale. Wow.
Grant
Thanx SO much GREG!!....appreciate the WOW!....always a pleasure brother poet!!......miss you around here!!!!.......high fives!!......T xo
Hi Tony, my pleasure to acknowledge your work.
BTW you are the 2nd person to call me Greg on Cosmofunnel today. Brilliant.
G
I really enjoyed this Tony, there is something very awe-inspiring about the universe and it's enormity, this is a truly fantastic piece...Very much enjoyed.
Lorna xx
I just LOVE reading creative artist writing about creation! This subject is one of my favorites!
Eloquently and poetically expressed! 5 stars for another work of art for my cyber bro!
your fan and follower,...
:) Q
Hey QUIXOTIC!!.... so sorry I never saw this one........I had a feeling that creation, cosmology and the universe were up your alley!!.......thanx so much for the positive feedback brother poet!!....... peace and hair grease....... smiles........T xo. ?✳✴☀
Love this Tony. Sorry I'm not very good at leaving detailed feedback.
This one ticks all the boxes though
No worries bro!!....... the fact that you took the time to go back and fond this one means a lot......... be well WAYNEHEAD!!.........peace .........T xo. ?✳✴☀