Poem -
Sentenced
Society has spoken
too many rules broken
the key has been thrown away
in this cage you must stay
No chance of a reprieve
alone your mother grieves
she didn't bring you up to be this way
for your sins she must pay
She shoulders all the guilt you don't feel
tries the wounded to heal
she gets spat on at every turn
her emotions churn
Society has spoken
too many rules broken
your safely barred
your mother's scarred
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A thought provoking piece Susan, well versed as always! Voted and nomed :)
thanks Rachel cheers hun x
well writen susan , bang on with that poem super.xx
thanks for a lovely comment Paul glad you liked the poem cheers x
ouch that hurt, this raw pieceÂ
that evokes!!
best to you Susan! Â Merry!!!Â
thanks Jai have a great christmas glad you liked the poem sláinte x
I did Susan, I enjoy your quirky sideÂ
it's good for my soul!!
Good morning, Jai :)Â
ive been called quirky before dont know what they mean just being me lol thanks Jai x
Susan- I really, really liked this, sad and true!!!
Mother would be scarred, I would!!
Congrats!
Nancy
thanks nancy hope your well cheers Susan x
This is a really good write but so is all your poems If you made a book Id buy it.
You the kind of poet that I favor.
hi rachel i just share online but how kind thanks glad you liked cheers x
Your welcome your a wonderful writer. keep writing, your so very talented.
ah i'm filling up thanks x