A Shadowy Figure
To most I may appear
just a shadowy figure in the streets
I may appear like this
but I didn't always look like this
At the age of 25
I fell in love with a tall handsome guy
Who loved me as his soon-to-be newlywed wife
Or so it seemed
Two weeks after we exchanged
our vows before the Great Divine
as a good supporting wife
accepted to leave everything behind
and enter into a world vastly different than mine
Oh why does love have to be so blind?!
How could I've not seen what truly was on his mind?!
As I walked in he said
You are in my world now
You have to do as I say
If you do not do as so
You will be beat for the day
How can this be?!
This is not what I had agreed!
I begged him to let me go back
but there was nothing I could do
to make him change his mind
for I was no longer a beautiful bride
but a face behind a veil I hide
only a shadowy figure in the streets
and even though I may appear like this
at least you know
I didn't always look like this
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Holy God Miss Sahara!!........I am praying that this is just a fictional narrative.........but somehow, I think not............this is SO VERY well written that you must have written before.............the timing and rhythm of this is on point............it's heartbeat ~ a lotic pleasure............the fabric of the subject matter is compelling and overwhelmingly sad in it's essence but well conceived and beautifully delivered ~ I want to cry and celebrate your gift as a writer at the same time.............I don't have the words to convey just how good this piece is.............thank you for sharing this with us all...... 5*s FAV ........well done...........and.........WELCOME to COSMO................Love and Rockets!!............T xo
Hello Sahara...
Thank you for sharing...
Wolf in sheep's clothing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Words can not truly convey the power of this piece !
Thanks for sharing your thoughts and feelings !
Best wishes.
Sahara---.I HOPE IT GETS PICKED TO BE PROMOTED ON FACEBOOK...
This piece is so good....if its your life thanks for putting it out...and you can run to me.
if not its still great the way its conveyed and makes you feel empathy for object....