"SHE"
She came to me like sunshine
Pouring over me, like honey
Changing me, into the uncomplicated
And helping me to see
That our earth is teeming
And so alive
Like the ebullience
Within champagne
Like the kiss,
She gave to me,
Quite willingly...
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How is it such a woman
So simplistic
So filled with life,
Sees me
And feels me too
For my heart is filled
With a complicated
Darkness...
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Yet,
When she is near
I am baptized
Pure,
As I bathe
In her oh so familiar
Energy,
That pristine,
Light,
Of She....
Tony Taylor
* This poem "SHE" coincides with a poem
Cherie Sumner posted 8/11/18
Which compliments her poem called "HE"
Smiles ?
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Hi Tony
Beautifully written.
It really does tell βSheβ completes you and vice versa.Read the βHeβ version and it very much complements with your βSheβ
Unique love story i must say ??
May God bless you both with lots of happiness and love ?Β
best regards xxx
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Thank you CHARU!!.....for recognizing that if you put the two poems right next to each other on a table.... you will literally see the symbiotic coupling of the two ~Β Literally !!.....Always looking forward to your comments dear poet sister!!...... God bless you and yours as well!!...... hugs n smiles!!......T xo β€?
Thanks for bathing me in your happy energy, Tony...really loved this poem!
Hey DAN!!..... so cool to see you on my page bro!!.... Just happy to know that you're reading and commenting on the one's you like!!...... Always a pleasure!!...... your cyber-friend and admirer!!.....T xo ?β€
aside from the fact that you too are so sweet....I love this piece I can tell you simply adore her....I wish many many blissful days together
Thank you SARAH!!.... We DO indeed!!?.... I appreciate the kind words very much dear poet sister!!..... Lots of love to you and yours!!..... hugs n smiles!!.....T xo β€??
Simply a wonderful poem. Β Being baptized is such a perfect line.
greg
Thanx GREG!!..... you know it brother...... Baptized Pure!!...... smiles.?......TTYL.......T xo ?β€
Thanx for the stars JOHN A.!!...... appreciate it man!!....... love to you and yours!!.....T xo β€
..................l......... Wow a wonderful romantic loving answer to her , very poetic and mesmerising in eloquence . She must be charmed I'm sure while we can admire the poetry you nicely share. The ending lines were ESP brill n shining. Kudos.
soo nice to read from your ink again, Pleez do write your thoughts/review/comment under my newest poem too, I like poets thoughts.Β
Beautiful x
Dear Tony,
So sorry Bro, for not getting to this sooner.Β With packing, and another upcoming surgery, I've had a lot on my mind.
Such darkness and anger surrounded my heart
Till the day that I found her, and my cleansing did start
Her kiss brought the sunlight back into my Soul
The shattered pieces of me, all at once became whole
.
Now evermore, I will bathe in her love
This Angel sent down from Heavens above
In Nirvana we'll stay, for Eternity
This Goddess of mine, the one I call "She"
All my love,
Larry xxx
wow so exceptionally beautiful. I so love your pen!