Poem -
She Has
She has hair of the brightest red
radiant, blazing,
dancing like flames in the gentle breeze.Â
She has eyes of the lightest blue
soft, inviting,Â
twinkling like stars in the night sky.Â
She has skin of the clearest ivory
smooth, alluring,
glowing like a beacon in the dark.Â
She has a soul of the purest light
kind, caring,
welcoming like the arms of an angel.Â
She has my heartÂ
blackened, hurting,Â
receiving her undeserved love.Â
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Comments
Such a delightful expression of love !
Warmest wishes to you ! Â :)
Thank you! This one was a fun one to write, I bit different from the format I'm used to! :)Â
xxxLilyÂ
:) Â x
Such delightful, carefree imagery; such breezy abandon in the sense of joyous love...and then the sucker punch of that last stanza!!
Deftly handled and nicely pulled off.
Lovely!
J x
I'm slowly finding I enjoy writing things with a twist at the end when you least expect it. I've done it in one of my other poems I've posted.Â
I'm glad you enjoyed! :)Â
xxxLilyÂ
Hi  Lilly lovely piece describing a love that isÂ
appreciated so much, I Â found the ending a little sad
saying that he /she felt  as if they were nt worthy of such love
 I enjoyed nevertheless
Best wishes Debs x
The ending is sad. I might write another part to this one, of said person feeling as if they've become worthy of her love but I'm not positive. I'm glad you enjoyed! :)Â
xxxLilyÂ
This is like a sweet song.........i can hear music....beautiful lyrics......superb poem
Enjoyed the rhythm....Thank You
I could definitely hear/see it as a song. I'm glad you enjoyed it and think it's superb! Thank you :)Â
xxxLilyÂ
I actually sang it out loud as like a song while reading...I love the format you used and the twist at the end...Lovely
Oh wow! That's really cool, I hope it had a nice tune haha I'm glad you enjoyed it. The format is different then my usual but I kind of like it thank you! :)Â
xxxLilyÂ