Poem -
She Is My Cygnus
She is beauty in the park
So gracefully navigating the pond
She is my Cygnus, my swan
So gracefully decorating the night
My Corona Borealis
Where her constellation is blessed
By the Gods and the Northern Cross,
She is my Deneb, the brightest star
In night's magnificent sky
She is more than the universe
For she is the spiritual starlight
My simple heart cannot comprehend
She's a giant galaxy's filament
That even cosmology
Cannot understand
She disguises herself as Zeus did
A swan,
And she is by far
The most beautiful swan
Floating in the night sky
She's the one
I give my Love to
Without questioning
Reasons why....
Tony Taylor (Chicago)
For: Her
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Beautiful imagery Tony and lovely sweeping construction.
John
Thanx so much JOHN!!..... very much appreciated my friend!!..... hugs-n-smiles!!......T xo ?ββ΄β₯β³?
I like this one Tony, not usually my genre but this is very well written. Love the rhymes.
All the bestΒ - SydΒ
SYD!!....I'm so psyched that you would comment on this bro!!....I know it's not something you often do!!......i'm flattered Bro!!...... hugs-n-high fives!!.....T xo β΄β₯ββ₯??
HoT it sizzlesΒ
like love β€οΈΒ
ββββββ Β Very good gripping right on the moneyΒ
Β Β Β Β Β Β TOny the manΒ
Β Β Β LuvvvvΒ
Β The Jai:))Β
Thanx JAI MASTERS always a pleasure!...... you're such a groovy friend..... can't wait to land in Congee Bay... and make my way to your neck of the woods !!.......hugs-n-smiles!!.....T xo ?β³β΄β₯β?β₯β₯
really nice poetry linda j wright
Thanx LINDA!!..... much appreciated my friend!!...... smiles.......T xo ?β³β΄β₯β?β₯
My Dear Tony,
She is floating through the Universe
This "Surreal Celestial Swan"
Dali has depicted her
In the sky, where she has gone
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This "Poetic Cob", now pledges
His love to ever be
With his "Cygnus Blessed Soulmate"
He will bond eternally
Love you Bro,
Larry xxx
Thanx LARRY!!...... you're like a friggin' mind reader with these poems as comments that you deliver so seemingly easily....... and the fact that you do it so consistently is truly charming......I bet you were one heluva art dealer!!.....thanx so much for this my dear poet brother!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.....T xo
My Dear Brother Poet tony,
As I have said before, your words oft times are a magic potion, that bring me to a euphoric state, allowing my pen to glide so easily over the paper.Β Β
The true mark of a poetic Soulmate.
By the way, I still am "one heluva art dealer"!
Love,
Larry xxx
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tony what a beautiful refrain from the heart
Thanx DARKLY!!.... always a pleasure to hear from you...... Love to you and yours girlfriend!!...... Hugs-n-Kisses!!.....T xo
Ok great one! Β Another masterpiece you have bestowed on us mere mortals! Love it
LOL!!.... you're a trip GREG..... and I thank the Gods for your presence here on COSMO!!...... stay groovy!!...... peace....T xo
Thanx GWEN!!..... much appreciated my friend!!..... Love to you & yours!!....... smiles.......T xo ??β₯