She's a witch
Look into her eyes,
what do you see?
A beautiful lady fit for a queen,
But not for the royals,
For she is immortal,
Some say she holds the power and keys to the fae,
And that they protect her through night and day,
Oh She's a witch did you say?
She's a wheeler dealer a healer and a very big feeler,
she gives balms and Herbs for cures,
And many long nights have been endured,
A big heart she holds,
Many past life stories left untold,
She's done a healing spell,
But Some say She's the queen of hell,
Her beautiful pale skin,
Her black hair very thin,
Beautiful blue of eyes,
that's had many crys,
Lips red as roses,
and oh how she poses,
She's a witch they say,
Spreading her healing love by day,
She says Healing herbs go in tea,
She's not evil like you see,
For that witch is me,
So mote it be.
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great write! welcome to Cosmo! please keep casting your spells here, I will enjoy them I'm sure!.................................................................................Jim
Thankyou very much. I'm glad to have found this site
Wow Toni, what can I say, such a fantastic and cleverly structured write. I especially enjoyed the flow from 3rd to 1st person. My favourite lines were probably;
I guess in life, it is all about perspective, how others view us, but most of the time they don't know our full story. That is the beauty of the human persona in my eyes.
Truly a fascinating write. Welcome to the Cosmos. I hope you enjoy it here.
Thankyou so much for your kind feedback, I was somewhat nervous to post any of my poems, but then I also figured what have I got to loose, i do have a few other poems I've written aswell, that are all somewhat true stories turned into something beautiful. Which I will slowly add aswell. I appreciate your kind words so much and that part is also my favorite part. Thankyou so much I'm open to all feedback even constructive criticism to a point. We don't know how we can improve things otherwise :)
I`m glad Toni, post away! In my 3 years on Cosmos, I haven`t really seen any negative feedback. We have a welcoming atmosphere here, so please, feel free to share as much as you would like. Can`t wait to see what else you have to show us!
Hello Toni and welcome to Cosmo :)
I loved reading this. It has a really good rhythm to it. Your wording throughout really gave a good visual for the reader and a mystical feel through your lines. A fun read
Gwen x
Thankyou I'm glad you were able to feel the mystical to this poem. It certainly makes it more visual if you feel it. Thankyou for your kind words
Toni...welcome to Cosmo. Please, please post more poems, you write beautifully. I totally love this poem. Hope you get to like it here on Cosmo x
What an absolutely delightful introduction to your written work Toni .. and I so look forward to many more .. Oh' and a warm welcome too and wishing you well .. Neville :)
Wonderfully played I loved and I relate in so many ways want to read more please
What a great poem to make your debut with on Cosmofunnel ! Welcome to a great site and hope to see more great works from you , Chris :)